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    Critique My Essay

    Anyone willing to Critique my essay?
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    Its a Narrative essay(An event that happen in your life)
    I wrote about me winning a Race
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    Quote Originally Posted by Assalamu alaikum View Post
    what? maybe stop talk with riddles and with words i am not even know.

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    Whats a Critique?

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    Quote Originally Posted by DomoGenesis View Post
    Whats a Critique?
    Where you point out the negatives and positives.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Assalamu alaikum View Post
    what? maybe stop talk with riddles and with words i am not even know.

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    Quote Originally Posted by xSnipe.Alt View Post
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    hey yunno what? i'll read it for you i just finished that class just over a month ago :P
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