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    Opinions needed.

    So I've been working on a book, I'm about 34 pages into it already but I figured I would get some opinions on the general plot.
    If you want to troll or flame the thread go for it..I don't care,
    that's basically all I do in General anyway..but I figure there will be a few srs peoples here that will offer some insight on this project of mine.

    So here is the plot..

    We all know that Roswell is full of all kinds of UFO conspiracies and what not..
    So back in the 50's a UFO crashes, most of the crew is dead but there were 2 aliens that survived the crash. Government Scientists after years of experimenting figured out a way to clone these aliens. The two from the crash were highly intelligent, and before they died of natural causes the scientists studied them relentlessly. Eventually the clones were mass produced and when they came of age they were raised much like a human was. The aliens learned the language, the human condition, and were trained by an elite branch of the military to be shaped into soldiers.

    The ultimate plan to be unhatched by the Government in the year 2012 is to have these aliens wage all out war against the world.. the reason being to unite all countries to fight against this "foreign" threat in order to bring world peace, and eventually birth a new style of global politics.
    This being a polyarchy ..where only 3 powerful and very rich men run the whole world, ending democracy and eventually freedom.

    The hero of the book is a hacker that intercepts a file while trying to hack into one of the largest banking firms on Wall street.


    K.. that's about all I'm gonna reveal.

    Gib me opinions!
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    That actually sounds interesting, looking forward to it Ethereal

    Just don't make it too long, I don't consider myself a reader....

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    As long as the aliens are beyond imagination.
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    Why would that sort of message go to a bank?

    As long as you don't use the Roswell cliche then you should be ok. More likely to be at Wright Patterson or Nebraska area.

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    Sounds good

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    Sounds quite interesting actually. What sort of genre is it going to be? Is it gonna have comedic influences.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bikadechu View Post
    Why would that sort of message go to a bank?

    As long as you don't use the Roswell cliche then you should be ok. More likely to be at Wright Patterson or Nebraska area.
    Because the powerful men talked about actually started out as bankers,
    and are basically responsible for the global economic decline.

    Quote Originally Posted by Doc View Post
    Sounds quite interesting actually. What sort of genre is it going to be? Is it gonna have comedic influences.
    Sci-fi /drama

    Shayne..it's me breh..you know I'm gonna add some laughs.

    Quote Originally Posted by bikadechu View Post

    As long as you don't use the Roswell cliche then you should be ok.
    Google earth area 51 sometime dude..there is some crazy shit over there.
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    Sounds like a win
    i was abit "orrr shit...... :/" with the whole planet of the apes thing i was hearinb, but then the intention to make them fight humans to untie them is pretty fucking awesome.

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    I'm into conspiracies just as much as you are, I remember you showed me some shit one time over MSN. Even though this isn't exactly true (that noone knows of anyways), it sounds interesting.

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    as long as they aint real, im totally into this plot.

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    Appreciate the feedback, keep em coming.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Not Bawls View Post
    Because the powerful men talked about actually started out as bankers,
    and are basically responsible for the global economic decline.



    Sci-fi /drama

    Shayne..it's me breh..you know I'm gonna add some laughs.



    Google earth area 51 sometime dude..there is some crazy shit over there.
    inb4trollfacealiens

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    If you're not being a troll about this as usual, i'd definitely support. the idea totally fits my tastebuds.

    Maybe make it in first person of this hacker?
    1) starts off with him in a piece of shit rut (like Suits) where he's out of options and needs cash but knows a lot about PCs and shit
    2) ends up hacking wall street
    3) finds the records
    4) highest level of the US military infiltrates him and tries to find him but he's covering up his own tracks?
    5) shit branches out from there

    very cool beans


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    Damn. I love the twist you put on the idea of 2012 "doomsday".

    Keep writing, man. This would be an interesting read.


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