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    Quote Originally Posted by Polo™ View Post


    You were rapping fast.
    LOL wut not really, i can rap 3 times faster then that, i can keep up close to the temp of pale kid raps fast


    Quote Originally Posted by Nitehawk772 View Post
    It's pretty cool, But your voice doesn't sound like an average rappers voice. Try rapping a little deeper next time.

    I'm only 15 I'll still try


    Quote Originally Posted by SouLess View Post
    Sorry bro, but u need to keep the tempo.
    Do you know how hard it is to have the same amount of syllables for each line? I wrote/recorded this in 30 minutes. Next time ill work on filling up each syllable

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    Didn't seem like it went with the tempo.


    Forfeit the game, before somebody
    else takes you outta the frame.
    And puts your name to shame
    Cover up your face, you can't
    run the race the pace is too fast
    You just won't last.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bombsaway707 View Post


    LOL wut not really, i can rap 3 times faster then that, i can keep up close to the temp of pale kid raps fast




    I'm only 15 I'll still try



    Do you know how hard it is to have the same amount of syllables for each line? I wrote/recorded this in 30 minutes. Next time ill work on filling up each syllable
    Oh lol "pale kids rap fast".

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    Quote Originally Posted by Less Than Three View Post
    Didn't seem like it went with the tempo.
    Cuz i don't fill up syllables with shit like most rappers do, if i can expand the syllables i just stretch out the word instead of going nikka shit or w/e rappers use to fill gaps. If i spent more time i could probably fill up all the syllables, and it was also suppose to seem kinda off/stressed out like eminems earlier raps where hes yelling

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bombsaway707 View Post

    Cuz i don't fill up syllables with shit like most rappers do, if i can expand the syllables i just stretch out the word instead of going nikka shit or w/e rappers use to fill gaps. If i spent more time i could probably fill up all the syllables, and it was also suppose to seem kinda off/stressed out like eminems earlier raps where hes yelling
    I kinda see where you're going with that. I honestly think it would sound better if you filled in the syllables though.


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    else takes you outta the frame.
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    Cover up your face, you can't
    run the race the pace is too fast
    You just won't last.

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    say bitch instead of nigga
    Im not InHuman

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    to hard for the Rhymes
    Good apart from that
    never rap battling you kkkkk

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    bad flow/choice of words. Good beats/voice tho.

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