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    15-20 mins of editing

    And the result is this.



    I want constructive criticism..

    However, don't talk to be about the lockon being messed up, all I did was keyframe a few locations here and there, it's not perfect, but it's not too shitty.

    I forgot to mute the sound on the second clip, yeah yeah.

    You can give comments on those above problems, but don't bitch about them.

    sexy quality though.

    This is Moto by the way.

    Main & Alt are banned.

    Edit: I know the song's sync at the end of the first clip is a bit sketchy too.
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    Video sharing?

    And the video thing wont work for me.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Obnoxious View Post
    Video sharing?

    And the video thing wont work for me.
    The sharing section is gone, smartypants.

    And why not? Just click on the title if you want to watch it on YouTube instead of embedded.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Obnoxious View Post
    My bad

    Just came back
    No problemo.

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    Its actually pretty good. But i think you shouldnt cut off your effects too fast.. like on the lock on thing. Slow that down a bit. And maybe change the text?
    Last edited by ydocsmada; 09-20-2011 at 01:16 AM.
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    What game is this o.o Looks very close to crossfire.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Leo View Post
    What game is this o.o Looks very close to crossfire.
    CoD 4 i believe.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Leo View Post
    What game is this o.o Looks very close to crossfire.
    Epic fucking /fp


    Quote Originally Posted by ydocsmada View Post
    Its actually pretty good. But i think you shouldnt cut off your effects too fast.. like on the lock on thing. Slow that down a bit. And maybe change the text?
    The font is actually rather shitty, though I can't find one that fits better.

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    poochăna is poochy.






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    Quote Originally Posted by Poocheeg View Post


    Epic fucking /fp




    The font is actually rather shitty, though I can't find one that fits better.
    Maybe try making it less opaque. I dont know if thatll do anything better, but it might.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ydocsmada View Post


    Maybe try making it less opaque. I dont know if thatll do anything better, but it might.
    I might just go for good old Arial

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    Too much slow mo, then speeds up too fast. Looks like you crammed too many effects into one short clip if you were meaning to make that as a part of a montage

    Also you cut the first two desert eagle kills to just reloading why not the third?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wolf View Post
    Too much slow mo, then speeds up too fast. Looks like you crammed too many effects into one short clip if you were meaning to make that as a part of a montage
    I was going to make a fragmovie out of the rest of the clips I have.. Fragmovies = overedited a ton.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Obnoxious View Post
    Video sharing?

    And the video thing wont work for me.
    Section is gone.

    @OP/TS, song is bad.

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