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    Quote Originally Posted by Arhk View Post
    If it weren't horribly boring I probably would've read passed the 2nd paragraph.
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    it's a twenty page story.
    Two paragraphs isn't even the beginning.

    Kids these days, won't even enjoy a good story if it's not read to them or put into a moving picture.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Love View Post

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    ahh okay. lmao
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    I would've enjoyed those two paragraphs more if they weren't completely empty of entertainment, introduction of the plot or character, a hook.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BigBangBaby View Post
    it's a twenty page story.
    Two paragraphs isn't even the beginning.

    Kids these days, won't even enjoy a good story if it's not read to them or put into a moving picture.
    Define 'good story'





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