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    What is this, i dont understand, what the hell am i doing wrong?

    Okay so, i am writing an essay.
    I wrote (for example) "The bird flew over the house into it's nest."
    Teacher: Too simple

    Then i wrote "The bird flapped it's wings as it gracefully traveled through the clouds, going against the wind as it glided. It passed over a luxurious house beneath it, and as it gently landed on top of it's nest, it's feet tightly gripped the materials, and stood firmly in their place."

    Teacher: Too expanded

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    Life's a bitch, deal with it.
    DEHUMANIZE YOURSELF
    AND FACE TO BLOODSHED

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    Sounds like your teacher is a bitch.

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    Teachers are stuped :P

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    Quote Originally Posted by Have-nameAlt View Post
    Teachers are stuped :P
    some are, some aren't


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    :[ guys, my teacher is awesome.

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    thats life for you

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    The bird flew into this thread and gave not one fuck on that day.

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    Make it in between those then, not that hard.

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    go with the one that you explained or w/e
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