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    Help me Elaborate on my 10-Page play?

    Hey guys, uhm in order to pass my Drama class i'v been assigned to make up a story/play and it has to be 10-Pages long. Well she also said to include a cover page, so 9 pages.

    I really wanna get this shit over with so i'm trying every trick in the book (Double-Space, size 16 font, etc)

    My Idea/Plot:
    A group of 4-5 Teenagers go on a camping trip & lose their food, and start eating wild shrooms (But they didnt know it was the shrooms, you get high from) .Then they see like Rainbows, and unicorns, and talking bears, Pink leaves, etc. And in the ending get water splashed in their face, and they realize they were just high.

    The title im also thinking about is "A Trip to remember" (Get it? Cuz its a camping trip and when you get high its called a Trip / ]

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    That's kinda not really a story.. you should add more like how they lost their food, what was in their way.. and etc.. you get my point.. make it detailed


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    Quote Originally Posted by Jacky View Post
    That's kinda not really a story.. you should add more like how they lost their food, what was in their way.. and etc.. you get my point.. make it detailed
    Thats what im asking you guys to help me with. Like.. Help me fill in the blanks.

    Ex: (Like you said) How they lost their food. Any activities they'd do while their high", etc

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    Dude, you suck. I love writing stories.

    Here's a hint if you're stuck: Write it based upon real-world events. The story is basically already written.

    I wrote a story about some earthquake in Haiti one day, and then next week it actually happened :O



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    Quote Originally Posted by Jetamay View Post
    Dude, you suck. I love writing stories.

    Here's a hint if you're stuck: Write it based upon real-world events. The story is basically already written.

    I wrote a story about some earthquake in Haiti one day, and then next week it actually happened :O
    Can i haz your story ? <3

    But writing isnt really my strong suit

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    If I was writing a play, id have two bitches slapping each other for 10 pages





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    I had the same assignment, but I had to write any play that is 10-15 minutes.
    My play is 6 pages, you can add some stuff to it if you want
    I'll send it to you

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    there's a movie with the same plot as your play that ive seen before

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cole View Post
    there's a movie with the same plot as your play that ive seen before
    Really? I just made it up

    Great minds think alike?

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    There's a movie like this called Shrooms.

    Look it up on netflix if you have it.

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