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    my poem :D

    this is my poem called . somtime's . its just so hard i cant go on because im scard in the dark its just so cold i feel like im going to fold im knowen to be cold because i feel so low down to my toes people show no hope because i have no way to coup like theres no hope. is there no way to coup to hope i dont think so. somtimes i try and i just want to die because i try and try but i just cry why do i even try in the's times. look i cant even think of ryme's becuase i have so much on my mind. my mind maybe one day it will shine it should be about dam time but u know what im fine i mean im tryen but whats the point of tryen if im gone end up cryen im so sick of cryen tryen i think about dien but theres people cryen because i think about dien fuck cryen fuck tryen. im just gone end up dien. i dont feel that way anymore tho. im a real deep person



    NO FUCKEN FLAMING PLS!

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    Wow, I felt that dude. Seriously, great job. I could rap that.

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    thats nice mate! realy nice

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    emo arab is emo


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    ty u guys that means alot to me

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    Quote Originally Posted by ClapBangKiss View Post
    emo arab is emo
    How is that emo. Thats fucking life dude.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jussofresh1 View Post
    How is that emo. Thats fucking life dude.
    true that.
    Last edited by M2A; 03-28-2009 at 12:05 PM.

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    Well, As I Was Reading..It's Repetitive But I Like It.

    AND NO, IT'S NOT FUCKING EMO
    FUCK EMO'S





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    they call me moe they think im a hoe but no ill go toe to toe no one can stop my flow......................im a deep person i see more in people then norm people do. i extreamly deep lmfao im deep and and i just sit here in my seat. and just creep . somepeople think its creepy i say u should see me be me feel me because your just number 3 and im free

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    nigga arab is nigga


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    Meet Mr. and Mrs. Crystal Meth.

    I destroy homes – I tear families apart.

    I take your children and that’s just a start.

    I’m more valued than diamonds, more precious than gold.

    The sorrow I bring is a sight to behold.

    If you need me, remember, I’m easily found.

    I live all around you, in school and in town.

    I live with the rich, I live with the poor.

    I live just down the street and maybe next door.

    I’m made in a lab, but not one like you think.

    I can be made under the kitchen sink,

    In your child’s closet, and even out in the woods.

    If this scares you to death, then it certainly should.

    I have many names. But there’s one you’ll know best.

    I’m sure you’ve heard of me, my name is Crystal Meth.

    My power is awesome, try me, you’ll see.

    But if you do, you may never break free.

    Just try me once and I might let you go.

    But if you try me twice, then I’ll own your soul.

    When I possess you, you’ll steal and you’ll lie.

    You’ll do what you have to do, just to get high.

    The crimes you commit for my narcotic charms,

    Will be worth the pleasures you feel in my arms.

    You’ll lie to your mother; you’ll steal from your dad.

    When you see their tears, you must feel sad.

    Just forget your morals and how you were raised.

    I’ll be your conscience, I’ll teach you my ways.

    I take kids from their parents; I take parents from their kids.

    I turn people from God, I separate friends.

    I’ll take everything from you, your looks and your pride.

    I’ll be with you always, right by your side.

    You’ll give up everything, your family, your home.

    Your money, your true friend, then you’ll be alone.

    I’ll take and take till you have no more to give.

    When I finish with you, you’ll be lucky to live.

    If you try me, be warned, this is not a game.

    If I’m given the chance, I’ll drive you insane.

    I’ll ravage your body; I’ll control your mind.

    I’ll own you completely; your soul will be mine.

    The nightmares I’ll give you when you’re lying in bed,

    And the voices you’ll hear from inside your head.

    The sweats, the shakes, and the visions from me.

    I want you to know these things are gifts from me.

    But then it’s too late, and you’ll know in your heart

    That you are now mine and we shall not part.

    You’ll regret that you tried me (they always do).

    But you came to me, not I to you.

    You knew this would happen.

    Many times you’ve been told.

    But you challenged my power,

    You chose to be bold.

    You could have said no and then walked away.

    If you could live that day over now, what would you say?

    My power is awesome, as I told you before.

    I can take your life and make it so dim and sore.

    I’ll be your master and you’ll be my slave.

    I’ll even go with you when you go to your grave.

    Now that you’ve met me, what will you do?

    Will you try me or not? It’s all up to you.

    I can show you more misery than words can tell.

    Come take my hand, let me lead you to H---.

    __________________


    way sick
    MindTek Exists As A Harm Reduction Nigga And Does Not Condemn Or Condone.

    Rap & Hip Hop section.

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    MindTek Exists As A Harm Reduction Nigga And Does Not Condemn Or Condone.

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    Good shit man, good shit.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MindTek View Post
    Meet Mr. and Mrs. Crystal Meth.

    I destroy homes – I tear families apart.

    I take your children and that’s just a start.

    I’m more valued than diamonds, more precious than gold.

    The sorrow I bring is a sight to behold.

    If you need me, remember, I’m easily found.

    I live all around you, in school and in town.

    I live with the rich, I live with the poor.

    I live just down the street and maybe next door.

    I’m made in a lab, but not one like you think.

    I can be made under the kitchen sink,

    In your child’s closet, and even out in the woods.

    If this scares you to death, then it certainly should.

    I have many names. But there’s one you’ll know best.

    I’m sure you’ve heard of me, my name is Crystal Meth.

    My power is awesome, try me, you’ll see.

    But if you do, you may never break free.

    Just try me once and I might let you go.

    But if you try me twice, then I’ll own your soul.

    When I possess you, you’ll steal and you’ll lie.

    You’ll do what you have to do, just to get high.

    The crimes you commit for my narcotic charms,

    Will be worth the pleasures you feel in my arms.

    You’ll lie to your mother; you’ll steal from your dad.

    When you see their tears, you must feel sad.

    Just forget your morals and how you were raised.

    I’ll be your conscience, I’ll teach you my ways.

    I take kids from their parents; I take parents from their kids.

    I turn people from God, I separate friends.

    I’ll take everything from you, your looks and your pride.

    I’ll be with you always, right by your side.

    You’ll give up everything, your family, your home.

    Your money, your true friend, then you’ll be alone.

    I’ll take and take till you have no more to give.

    When I finish with you, you’ll be lucky to live.

    If you try me, be warned, this is not a game.

    If I’m given the chance, I’ll drive you insane.

    I’ll ravage your body; I’ll control your mind.

    I’ll own you completely; your soul will be mine.

    The nightmares I’ll give you when you’re lying in bed,

    And the voices you’ll hear from inside your head.

    The sweats, the shakes, and the visions from me.

    I want you to know these things are gifts from me.

    But then it’s too late, and you’ll know in your heart

    That you are now mine and we shall not part.

    You’ll regret that you tried me (they always do).

    But you came to me, not I to you.

    You knew this would happen.

    Many times you’ve been told.

    But you challenged my power,

    You chose to be bold.

    You could have said no and then walked away.

    If you could live that day over now, what would you say?

    My power is awesome, as I told you before.

    I can take your life and make it so dim and sore.

    I’ll be your master and you’ll be my slave.

    I’ll even go with you when you go to your grave.

    Now that you’ve met me, what will you do?

    Will you try me or not? It’s all up to you.

    I can show you more misery than words can tell.

    Come take my hand, let me lead you to H---.

    __________________


    way sick
    super sick

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