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    my 2 poem

    i just lay here. it feels like its been years. my tears have become my fears. and here i stay waiting for a another day. its crazy how lazy i am. "drives me crazy". but some times u just dont know who u are. sometimes u drive in that car. and u really dont get to far. its just so hard and some times your life passes u card by card. or car by car. even tho u dont get far. u just keep driven in your car and your heart feels like its torn apart but why do u care. u just know it unfare too. but do u even have a clue.u feel like theres nothing u can do.who knew things like this can be so true. but it is true. it true for me and its true for u. "some people dont have even a clue"."and some people just feel blue".so u fallow threw and do what u do.and maybe one day u wont get screwed.

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    it rhymed! w.o.w


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    Quote Originally Posted by ClapBangKiss View Post
    it rhymed! w.o.w
    -_- *10 thing*

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    Hahah dam that was pretty good, You should make a song.

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    yeacthen record it and post it on youtube lol





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    Enough with your emo poems.

    I just lay here. It feels like it's been years. My tears have become my fears, and here I stay, waiting for another day. It's crazy how lazy I am; "drives me crazy," but some times, you just don't know who you are. Sometimes, you drive in that car, and you really don't get too far. It's just so hard and sometimes, your life passes you card by card, or car by car. Even though you don't get far, you just keep driv'in in your car, and your heart feels like it's torn apart, but why do u care? You just know it's unfair too. But do you even have a clue? You feel like there's nothing you can do. Who knew things like this can be so true? But it is true. It's true for me and it's true for you. "Some people don't even have a clue." "And some people just feel blue." So you fallow through and do what you do, and maybe one day, you won't get screwed.

    God dammit. Took me so long to correct all your spelling and grammatical errors.
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    Hyperion, you forgot to separate through stanzas.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SnilNotSnail View Post
    Hyperion, you forgot to separate through stanzas.
    Not all poems are in stanza form.

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    lol my friends are gonna lol TY.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dave84311 View Post
    yeacthen record it and post it on youtube lol
    It'll sound so professional hahah.

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    hardy har har. I can't write much of a comment on ipod touch. Stupid fucking touch kb is so fuckin hard to use.



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    eh not liking thee poems 2 much

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