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    Quote Originally Posted by billybobjob123 View Post


    Does it fucking say I wanted someone else to do it?go to fucking specsavers you fucking retard, I wanted help on what to write about.
    I am the seer in the dark,
    the vagabond of yore,
    valediction.
    I am the sum of all your parts,
    and proprietor of all.
    A miasma,
    the conclusion,
    blackmonger of Inlé,
    valediction.
    Synapses fray,
    my form now vivid,
    as torpor sets and blood grows tepid.
    With every ounce of flesh now offered,
    I hold your corpse within my coffers.
    Knitted cells now split asunder,
    stand alongside me brother.
    Take your place amongst my Owsla,
    we march at dawn now and forever.


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    you can type 1000 words in like 30 minutes

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aborted View Post

    ha, you're just posting that picture to try get out of the hole you dug yourself. pathetic.

    SOUNDCLOUD



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    Quote Originally Posted by billybobjob123 View Post


    ha, you're just posting that picture to try get out of the hole you dug yourself. pathetic.
    Isn't this kid adorable?
    I am the seer in the dark,
    the vagabond of yore,
    valediction.
    I am the sum of all your parts,
    and proprietor of all.
    A miasma,
    the conclusion,
    blackmonger of Inlé,
    valediction.
    Synapses fray,
    my form now vivid,
    as torpor sets and blood grows tepid.
    With every ounce of flesh now offered,
    I hold your corpse within my coffers.
    Knitted cells now split asunder,
    stand alongside me brother.
    Take your place amongst my Owsla,
    we march at dawn now and forever.


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    Quote Originally Posted by billybobjob123 View Post
    SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
    I have an English essay due tomorrow annnnd I haven't started yet..... lelelel
    Even though I get an extension because I just got back from QLD a day ago.

    So anyways, the topic is on Australian Identity.... about identity and belonging or sumshizzle

    I was thinking about writing about a Japanese immigrant that came to Aus feeling un-excepted and left-out.

    He goes to join a racing club/ team and there are already 2 guys in it

    guy one: Bruce
    guy 2: mike

    Bruce does'nt like immigrants and bullies the jap
    Mike throughout the story tries to prevent dis shizzle from happening.....


    the bullying ends up getting so bad that the Jap decides to move back to Japooooon

    yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeea
    that's all I have write naow... I need to do like atleast 1000 words






    Any ideas? D:
    Doesn't directly address the prompt of AUSTRALIAN identity. You could talk about an immigrant who had difficultly identifying with Australian culture but eventually was able to overcome those problems if you use the example of a child joining school as a preteen-teen who had to re-learn how to socialize and adapt to the culture, especially since social trends propagate through school as kids follow the media. By doing that you can describe what it means to be Australian indirectly. You have to make sure to address positive sides of Australian culture with a bit of negative sides too. A project like this though seems like its trying to enforce nationalism by coming up with a story about what it means to be Australian so it makes sense to have more positive sides than negative sides.

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    Aww damn, I love english but I wouldn't do your essay for you anyways. I'd just ask you to write it so I can proofread it / change into my own sexy writing.
    ... hi


     

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    Quote Originally Posted by iverson954360 View Post


    Doesn't directly address the prompt of AUSTRALIAN identity. You could talk about an immigrant who had difficultly identifying with Australian culture but eventually was able to overcome those problems if you use the example of a child joining school as a preteen-teen who had to re-learn how to socialize and adapt to the culture, especially since social trends propagate through school as kids follow the media. By doing that you can describe what it means to be Australian indirectly. You have to make sure to address positive sides of Australian culture with a bit of negative sides too. A project like this though seems like its trying to enforce nationalism by coming up with a story about what it means to be Australian so it makes sense to have more positive sides than negative sides.
    Thank-you! someone who's actually fucking helpful.

    My story was sorta implying that on characteristic of Australian people are that they are accepting I guess

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