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    Post Poem/Lyrics: The Mercenary

    Hey, here's another poem (lyrics for a song to be precise), that I wrote some time ago. It's about a mercenary that has been forced to kill his loved one.

    Blue = Chorus
    Green = Verse
    Red = Bridge

    Well I am a mercenary, I kill for money
    And if you're in my way, I'll take you away
    As I see the darkened skies, I see blood in your eyes

    This time you got me for good, faith never understood
    There's blood on my hands, going to no man's land
    As I'm taking my last breath, I can't say I'm awake


    I'd never thought we could go this far, I'd never thought it could turn out like this
    I'd never thought you'd make me do this, I'd never thought I'd kill you

    In a blink the bullet pierced right through her heart, the heart of the one I loved, our hearts torn apart
    Now it's too late, no you're gone, what have I done? What have I become?


    I still see your face in the mist, I can still hear your voice in my head
    We will be, together forever, even death cannot do us part

    So I am a mercenary, I kill for money
    And if you're in my way, I'll take you away
    As I see the darkened skies, I see blood in your eyes

    This time you got me for good, faith never understood
    There's blood on my hands, going to no man's land
    As I'm taking my last breath, I can't say I'm awake


    Was saving his life, really worth giving yours? And not only give yours, I've just killed us both
    With another bullet gonna end this misery, make the pain go away

    This is not fate, we reap what we sow, no one else to blame and it's my own fault, I know
    In this moment the pain, is so unbearable, end of the line, suffering is mine forever


    I still see your face in the mist, I can still hear your voice in my head
    We will be, together forever, even death cannot do us part


    Can you predict what happened in the end?
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    You'll stop being a sentimental faggot.

     
    Suicide obviously

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    Suicide

    much deep

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    Obvious ending: He suicides by shooting himself with his gun.
    Alternate Ending: He will take revenge by killing his employer and then gets killed by his guards, leaving everything he had behind.
    Alternate Ending 2: This pain will be with him forever, rendering him a broken person with no hope to live but he wouldn't suicide. He punishes himself by living and suffering.


    Quote Originally Posted by AqworldThunder View Post
    You'll stop being a sentimental faggot.
    No, you'll stop taking things at face value.
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    lol.. nice22
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zuhrain View Post
    lol.. nice22
    Thanks mate...
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    We do have a section for these things.
    One more thing, the blue is too close in color to the green.
    It's all just chorus.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Antipathy View Post
    We do have a section for these things.
    One more thing, the blue is too close in color to the green.
    It's all just chorus.
    Where's that section? I'm not sure about the color, I could easily tell the difference but I'll keep that in mind.
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    It is supposed to be under art, but I can't find it.
    It might be my display then.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Antipathy View Post
    It is supposed to be under art, but I can't find it.
    It might be my display then.
    Are you talking about this section? It doesn't appear to be a place for poetry.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Reav3R View Post


    Are you talking about this section? It doesn't appear to be a place for poetry.
    Well, technically poetry is an art.
    But I can't seem to locate the section I meant.

    It's all good.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Reav3R View Post


    Thanks mate...
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    This sounds like it could become a story for a potential game

    Or maybe it already has been in a game?
    Godlike.

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