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    Post Lyrics/Poem: Transcendence

    I wrote this piece today, let me know what you think.

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    From the front to the back
    (every soldier), whole pack (entire army) attack
    The lack of ammo, but our fists stack
    (when ammo runs out, we fight barehanded)

    Got no gun, yet we make the enemies run
    (enemies still fear us even if we're unarmed)
    Under the stunning sunlight
    (scorching sun in the desert), lay waste upon (kill)

    All of those who stand, in our way
    We terminate them, in this very
    (exact) day

    Annihilation, a nation
    (city) of shades (ghosts of dead soldiers) and shit (guts of corpses)
    The blood rains red
    (blood will be shed), when the bomb is set

    Then their commander we drowned, screaming enemy down
    And the hounds of rounds
    (tracking bullets) piercing, through their gowns (weak armor)
    See the frown
    (fear) on their faces, in this ghost town

    All they've got is nothin', drugs for buffin'
    Whole day bluffin', till they lay in their coffin

    Inspired by Call of Duty - Ghosts...

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    Thank you all for reading, I'm so motivated to post more...
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    Sounds like a rap

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jov View Post
    Sounds like a rap
    It actually is. Rap lyrics...
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    Sweet man. keep it up

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