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    Post Poem/Lyrics: CHOOSE

    Here's my new poem, I'm not gonna explain stuff like my last ones because I want to leave it to your own imagination but if you don't understand a part, feel free to ask and I'll answer.

    We didn't choose to be born, in this world of treason
    But we can choose to die, for a cause a reason
    We can blindly see, with empty hollowed eyes
    If the need be, from our ashes rise

    When the ties that bind us, are the lies that haunt us
    The only thing that defines us, is the truth that denies us
    See? Pain and despair spread through the air
    Contagious, infectious, say truth or dare

    Truth be revealing skeletons in your closet
    Dare be, wage a war against who we are
    Well I, come from a place, where one can make all the difference
    So I know that you can, be a better man

    We didn't choose to be born, yet we choose to live
    In this never-ending maze, we are, free to believe
    When your way is to say, wanna live another day
    You'd do anything and all you see, shades of grey

    We just, don't wanna know, when it gets us low
    We shut our eyes, close our minds wanting the pain to go
    So let's end this debate, leave it to hands of fate
    And stop asking why when answer's what you hate

    Well I finding it funny that we are always running
    So way away from, ourselves, what we're becoming
    And now the tears are, washing us, like the rain
    One has to end right here, the life or the pain


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    Wow I thought this was good. Im not a poem guy but I really liked it. The first part was my favorite. Nice Work

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    Quote Originally Posted by Reav3R View Post
    Here's my new poem, I'm not gonna explain stuff like my last ones because I want to leave it to your own imagination but if you don't understand a part, feel free to ask and I'll answer.We didn't choose to be born, in this world of treasonBut we can choose to die, for a cause a reasonWe can blindly see, with empty hollowed eyesIf the need be, from our ashes riseWhen the ties that bind us, are the lies that haunt usThe only thing that defines us, is the truth that denies usSee? Pain and despair spread through the airContagious, infectious, say truth or dareTruth be revealing skeletons in your closetDare be, wage a war against who we areWell I, come from a place, where one can make all the differenceSo I know that you can, be a better manWe didn't choose to be born, yet we choose to liveIn this never-ending maze, we are, free to believeWhen your way is to say, wanna live another dayYou'd do anything and all you see, shades of greyWe just, don't wanna know, when it gets us lowWe shut our eyes, close our minds wanting the pain to goSo let's end this debate, leave it to hands of fateAnd stop asking why when answer's what you hateWell I finding it funny that we are always runningSo way away from, ourselves, what we're becomingAnd now the tears are, washing us, like the rainOne has to end right here, the life or the painOpinion? @Jov
    We did have a poetry section, not sure if it's till around, but it did have some great material in there.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Muntailor View Post
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    Thanks for your irrelevant opinions.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Reav3R View Post
    Thanks for your irrelevant opinions.
    If you think our opinions are irrelevant, then don't fucking ask for them.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Martin Johnson View Post


    If you think our opinions are irrelevant, then don't fucking ask for them.
    Don't be an idiot.

    OT: I thought it was interesting, pretty deep, though parts didn't flow.

    At least that's how I read it. it was good

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    Quote Originally Posted by Evocate View Post


    Don't be an idiot.

    OT: I thought it was interesting, pretty deep, though parts didn't flow.

    At least that's how I read it. it was good
    How am I being an idiot exactly?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Martin Johnson View Post


    How am I being an idiot exactly?
    You don't think any of those comments were unnecessary?
    Along with you acting like a hardass defending them.
    Anyways, I'm not going to fight with you. Useless.

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    This some Linkin park shit.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Martin Johnson View Post


    How am I being an idiot exactly?
    You can't tell the difference between some gaytarded troll poem (if you could even call it a poem) and a constructive opinion.
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    So beautiful
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    for me , well, i'm not in english , i will give 9/10 .
    good2.. i don't that you know how to make poem..
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