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    The other gfxers touched on it enough .

    I am one too but you get the gist.

    Anyways, i like it a lot, would you like to create me one? Of course on your own time when you can.

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    Quote Originally Posted by gamer4evere View Post
    You had the background as a wooden texture. And u just darkened it.
    Then cut a nebula stock and made the white outline.
    Honestly that's the worst part the thick outline contrasts too much and ruins it. Plus its too simpel, maybe you should add fractals there or c4Ds...
    Simplicity is a league of its own. Not everything has to be video game renders and effects.

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    Looks pretty damn good to me. Would make it my wallpaper.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryan View Post


    Simplicity is a league of its own. Not everything has to be video game renders and effects.
    Sure I agree but shouldnt the white borders not be there, or be like thinner and blending better? Cuz in the context, pure white just wont do. at least thats how I view it.
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    I love this wallpaper @Pepsi Cola ,but what I dislike the most are the rectangles. The white borders pop out a bit too much, also the sizes. If they were all the same size, tall and wide, and thin white borders it'd look great!

    Good job!
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Deflorate. View Post
    The white outlines don't go good with the rest of the piece at all. Try lowering the opacity on them, or change the color to something darker and something that stands out less.

    As for the design in general, it's very simple and flat. Try to make the window effect more 3d, make some depth appear. And I also think you'd be better without the nebula overlay over the wood. I'd just leave that as a purple background to the image.

    And one last thing, the 2nd and 3rd window's images don't align properly and it's bothering me.
    Quote Originally Posted by Ryan View Post
    The non-congruent "windows" do throw me off a little bit like @Deflorate. said, although I think the borders are fine the way they are. They wouldn't look quite as strange on a gray bg like the original stock. Borders like that are usually meant to create contrast, so when the bg shares in the nebula's color scheme, they seem a bit pointless.

    Whatever green/yellow brushing you've done around the canvas actually devalues the contrast as well by giving the sense that the nebula isn't confined.

    The only other issue I see is the low quality of the nebula stock, but you can only do so much about that because it's in space.
    I also just realised the non-congruent windows and I will fix them. Thanks, also after all the feedback I got one thing was common in all of it which was the borders so I will fade them making it blend into the picture more.

    Quote Originally Posted by gamer4evere View Post
    You had the background as a wooden texture. And u just darkened it.
    Then cut a nebula stock and made the white outline.
    Honestly that's the worst part the thick outline contrasts too much and ruins it. Plus its too simpel, maybe you should add fractals there or c4Ds...
    Quote Originally Posted by .REZ View Post
    The three rectangles stand out too much, you should have lowered the opacity or blended them. Or you could be like Seyeko and just topaz it until it's dead and then some.

    I like simplicity >.< But I do plan on changing the border a bit as everybody has suggested.

    Quote Originally Posted by bowlcut View Post
    This is just a copy of another wallpaper. I've seen it before.


    However, you've certainly improved on it. Nice shit. Just listen to everyone else, because those white lines are pthick buddy.
    I got the inspiration from another wallpaper, yes. But I'm quite sure mine ended up being different despite the same kinda stuff.

    Quote Originally Posted by Doc View Post
    It's cool, I'd prefer if you put a b&w gradient map on the background, then perhaps use a pure black border or even get a picture frame stock, and frame the three images. Would be cool.
    The first copy I made actually did have a black & white backround, but I decided to change it because it still looked to simple for an already minimalistic wallpaper.

    Quote Originally Posted by Evocate View Post
    The other gfxers touched on it enough .

    I am one too but you get the gist.

    Anyways, i like it a lot, would you like to create me one? Of course on your own time when you can.
    Sure, I'd be happy to. If you like just PM or VM me the specific details.

    Quote Originally Posted by gamer4evere View Post

    Sure I agree but shouldnt the white borders not be there, or be like thinner and blending better? Cuz in the context, pure white just wont do. at least thats how I view it.
    Quote Originally Posted by Yotsuba View Post
    I love this wallpaper @Pepsi Cola ,but what I dislike the most are the rectangles. The white borders pop out a bit too much, also the sizes. If they were all the same size, tall and wide, and thin white borders it'd look great!

    Good job!
    Thanks. I plan on changing the borders after all the all the negative feedback of the borders as I mentioned earlier.

    Thank you all for your input and help.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Pepsi Cola View Post
    I got the inspiration from another wallpaper, yes. But I'm quite sure mine ended up being different despite the same kinda stuff.
    Actually, there's like 5 different versions of this same wallpaper.
    They're all the same, though; yours is just, different.

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    Cool, then I await for the update!
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    I am sure that you downloaded a background and kept making shapes to make it like this, Also looks nice

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    nice not bad for a beginner
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    Quote Originally Posted by Wrecked? View Post
    I am sure that you downloaded a background and kept making shapes to make it like this, Also looks nice
    Ummm... No I didn't. But thanks.


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    to the unprofessional eye, it looks pretty damn nice.
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    opaque frames, matching dimensions of the focals, and better quality nebula stocks would have made this look better imo.

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