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    Exclamation Check out my music?

    I am making music and currently i have released 5 songs, i am working on my 6th one.

    I would like some comments and opinions, genre is EDM, so if you are not into that kind of stuff please dont listen then.

    Here is my YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/sebastianmudrinjak

    I suggest you check this song first as it it the best one i have made yet:

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    In all honesty that wasen't great at all there was no kick its was just flat

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    Quote Originally Posted by KillTheNoise View Post
    In all honesty that wasen't great at all there was no kick its was just flat
    I respect constructive criticism, but i quite liked the song as it was



    // 500th post as well YAY ME

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    wtf is awesome,LOL

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    Not a big EDM fan at all, but I can give you some pointers:
    Production is your biggest problem here, as @KillTheNoise said, your response is flat.
    I'd suggest boosting your bass by about 6-7 decibels and see how that works.

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    Damn double post.
    I am the seer in the dark,
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    I am the sum of all your parts,
    and proprietor of all.
    A miasma,
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    blackmonger of Inlé,
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    my form now vivid,
    as torpor sets and blood grows tepid.
    With every ounce of flesh now offered,
    I hold your corpse within my coffers.
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    stand alongside me brother.
    Take your place amongst my Owsla,
    we march at dawn now and forever.


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    I didn't like it at all.

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    Quote Originally Posted by molot View Post
    wtf is awesome,LOL
    Thank you man

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aborted View Post
    Not a big EDM fan at all, but I can give you some pointers:
    Production is your biggest problem here, as @KillTheNoise said, your response is flat.
    I'd suggest boosting your bass by about 6-7 decibels and see how that works.

    Thanks bro, but dont forget im a still big noob in making music, so i am pretty happy with all the things i have done so far. I will most definitely take your suggestions into consideration

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    Subtractive EQ and less reverb. Needs more melodic elements to fill the frequency spectrum void, or you can side-chain the reverb. Keep the lead front and center, it sounded pushed too far back.

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    Not bad i actually liked it

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lehsyrus View Post
    Subtractive EQ and less reverb. Needs more melodic elements to fill the frequency spectrum void, or you can side-chain the reverb. Keep the lead front and center, it sounded pushed too far back.
    I guarantee he didn't understand a single word in this post.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Deflorate. View Post


    I guarantee he didn't understand a single word in this post.
    I guarantee u dont understand a single word he said. I might be new to making music but i aint retarded.

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    Quote Originally Posted by -3ncrypted View Post
    Not bad i actually liked it
    Thank you bro

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lehsyrus View Post
    Subtractive EQ and less reverb. Needs more melodic elements to fill the frequency spectrum void, or you can side-chain the reverb. Keep the lead front and center, it sounded pushed too far back.
    The problem might be that i actually used too much EQ.

    Lead was EQed in fruity EQ which isnt very good plugin for EQing music, there are much better EQs out there but im too lazy to DL them.

    Thx for your comment anyway bro,i appreciate it.

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