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    Post My new Poem/Lyrics: You give me a title.

    Wrote a new song couple of days ago and finished it today, let me know how many fucks you don't give and give me a good title for it.

    Green = lyrics
    () = Explanation


    In the rain (=tears), the pain (=agony)
    Is burning me away
    (making me suffer)
    And the sorrow, for tomorrow's
    (because tommorow is)
    The ghost of yesterday
    (everyday I do the same things over and over again)
    And to say, I pray, today's
    (saying I pray today is)
    Deception leading the way
    (deceiving myself)
    As it turns to grey
    (eventually, I will no longer care)

    It's way over me
    (it has consumed me), living in a fantasy
    So finally set me free, there's no more to see
    Again, again, I'm drowning in my sea
    (my dreams are suffocating me)

    Emptiness, loneliness
    Is tearing me apart
    And the sorrow, for so hollow's
    (because empty is)
    Every single word I write
    In my sight
    (=my belief), I know, I'm right
    The phantom that's my art
    (my art is like a phantom that)
    Will bear the light
    (keep the truth untold forever)

    'cuz it's way over me
    (it has consumed me), dying in a fantasy
    So finally set me free, when there's no more to see
    Again, again, I'm drowning in my sea
    (my dreams are suffocating me)

    So to rest, I confessed
    To crime I've never done
    And the sorrow, for the arrow's
    (the arrow is)
    Right in my heart, alone
    To the bone, the knife, has gone
    The pain brought by my own
    (I have done this to myself)
    I still carry on

    now it's way over me
    (it has consumed me), bleeding in a fantasy
    So finally set me free, 'cuz there's no more to see
    Again, again, I'm drowning in the sea
    (my dreams are suffocating me)
    Of my fantasy


    @ @Zuhrain Don't bother reading, you won't understand a word.
    @ @Misery I wish I could put myself on your ignore list because I don't even want you to see this.
    @ @Jov RIP bro.
    @ @Abnormality @Aborted I wonder how you plan to troll me here again.

    inb4 phags & trolls, please politely fuck the hell off before I fuck you up
    Last edited by Reav3R; 06-25-2014 at 03:39 AM.
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    First of all, what makes you think that either me or Aborted cares about your poem enough to make an effort to troll you, both him and I just speak our mind and we are honest about most things.


    Second of all, why on earth would you have to explain a song, a song is meant to be interpreted by its listener, and again, any normal brain has that mentioned ability.
    I will tell you this though. I stopped reading after the first few lines due to the fact that you had to explain it. It ruined it completely.

    One last thing, I dare you to come and try to fuck me up, I will literally eat you alive and then dissolve the rest in my bathtub. Come get, I live in Gotland. Visby.
    Last edited by Xenocide; 06-25-2014 at 02:26 PM. Reason: Typo. Screw you autocorrect.

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    If you gonna read it faster , and turn up the beat , you can get a ”Eminem” rap song .

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    try to fuk me up m8, i swear on me mum imma wrek u m8.
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    still a bitch I see. First of all I hate Zuhrain as much as I hate you (maybe less). Second of all I read the poem which is shit. Reason? Who the fuck would explain every single fucking word of a "poem". Let along the lack of good/advanced language. Third of all what really annoyed me is you thinking you're better than Zuhrain (atleast he's got manners) and that actually Aborted and Antipathy would give a shit about you or your poem. I tried "swallowing" the fact that you're still on MPGH but you just made it as worst as possible.
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    Nigga if you didn't want me to see this, why the fuck did you mention me?

    A whole new league of stupid, I swear.

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    Holy fuck you deserve a ban or CS for that shit that you just wrote. Please refrain from posting in general until you graduate from Kindergarten.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Scotia View Post
    Holy fuck you deserve a ban or CS for that shit that you just wrote. Please refrain from posting in general until you graduate from Kindergarten.
    Yo, kindergarten hard doe

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