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    Grammar nazis.

    Im in the middle of making a college application and if you are willing to go over the spelling punctuation and grammar please let me know or even if you have something better to suggets that would be kind

    I have chosen I computing career path because I frequently use computers.I am always looking for something new to learn and i have fun learning it.Sports is one of my career options as I play sports or a participation level but i enjoy it also I an good at theory. I am additionally looking for career in the medical field as i enjoy Science and Physical education and if I was to go into the Medical section i would go into physiotherapy.

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    I will fix the wording as well.

    I have chosen the computing career pathway because I frequently use computers. I enjoy learning new things. The other pathway I had in mind was Sports because I play sports. I am additionally looking for career in the medical field as I enjoy Science and Physical education and if I was to go into the Medical section i would go into physiotherapy.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Democritus View Post
    as i enjoy
    It's "I".

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mayion View Post

    It's "I".
    Sorry I missed 1...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Democritus View Post


    Sorry I missed 1...
    College doesn't tolerate mistake.

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    Quote Originally Posted by xaviar View Post

    College doesn't tolerate mistake.
    Clearly I was not going to be the first person to proof read. It is his paper, not even mine lay off.

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    Guys relax its not a full personal statement its just why i wont to do A Level @arunforce close please

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    you guys in America, is college and uni the same thing? Certainly not in the UK :P

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    Quote Originally Posted by NemsOne View Post
    you guys in America, is college and uni the same thing? Certainly not in the UK :P
    Yes, but not in European countries its not.
    Uni and college mean the same thing in our country. In other countries such as UK and France; College normally means Middle-High School level.
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    Quote Originally Posted by thisisreal34 View Post
    I have chosen I computing career path because I frequently use computers.I am always looking for something new to learn and i have fun learning it.Sports is one of my career options as I play sports or a participation level but i enjoy it also I an good at theory. I am additionally looking for career in the medical field as i enjoy Science and Physical education and if I was to go into the Medical section i would go into physiotherapy.
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    I have chosen a computing career path because I frequently use and deal with computers. I am always looking for something new to learn and I have fun while learning it. Sports is one of my career options as well, as I play sports on a certain level of participation, but I enjoy it. I'm also talented at theory. I am additionally looking for a career in the medical field as I enjoy Science and Physical Education and if I were to go into a medical career, I would select physiotherapy.
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    I can do this. I would concede I'm well spoken have versatile knowledge and suggestive use of the English language. Used to be on the News FO as well. In addition, of the AP classes I took during my high school academic career, 3 pertain to this: Hon English, AP Lit/Comp and AP Lang.

    As far as your application goes, is this the entrance essay or apart of your application in?

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    Advancing into the real world, I find myself at a substantive level of peace of which I can directly correlate to my final career I would like to pursue: (degree goes here ie; Computer Science or be broad like say IT) . The twentieth century is minimizing as we speak, minimizing and losing space due to the actively transgressing technology and I have found much interest in learning and understand technology because it's always changing, it's always adapting to new standards or progressing from outdated inefficiencies. Throughout high school I began pursuing this on my own, learning and understanding the technology and finalizing a split in the Earth between numerous other careers: Sports and the medical sciences where at one point of difference within myself I was considering physiotherapy to meet my passions in the middle.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dave's Sheep View Post
    I can do this. I would concede I'm well spoken have versatile knowledge and suggestive use of the English language. Used to be on the News FO as well. In addition, of the AP classes I took during my high school academic career, 3 pertain to this: Hon English, AP Lit/Comp and AP Lang.

    As far as your application goes, is this the entrance essay or apart of your application in?
    part of an application to get the next application to get in

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    Quote Originally Posted by αяgуяσѕ View Post
    Yes, but not in European countries its not.
    Uni and college mean the same thing in our country. In other countries such as UK and France; College normally means Middle-High School level.
    in the UK, it mainly goes.
    primary school year 1-8
    highschool 9-12
    college if your're not intellegent enough for uni
    then uni instead of colleg if your grades are higher than the requirements for college. but it depends on what uni

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    me primary school is 1-11 highschool 11-16 college 16-18 then uni

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    Edited my post with my revision/revamp.
    what the fuck is your English were did you learn to speak like that

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