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    Me singing + rapping

    I haven't sang before
    pls criticise

    I was originally going to just solo in the second half of the song but then I wrote more.

    https://soundcloud.com/djtrafford/trafford-bipolar-man

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    This sounds really good man

    Why so

    Serious?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dajackle21 View Post
    This sounds really good man
    Aw fuck yis, I've listened to it too many times to tell if it's good or not. Thanks mang

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    Do you listen to ODESZA or Blackmill by chance?

    Why so

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dajackle21 View Post
    Do you listen to ODESZA or Blackmill by chance?
    Used to listen to a little bit of Blackmill yeah, haven't for a long while though

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    I am sorry man but not my style of music.

    Good Luck through

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    the song is very pretty text a little less

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    Quote Originally Posted by molot View Post
    the song is very pretty text a little less
    Yeah, hence why its called Bipolar man I guess

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    It's not bad, but the text could be better
     

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    Quote Originally Posted by derpik View Post
    It's not bad, but the text could be better
    Do you guys mean lyrics or what

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    Do you guys mean lyrics or what
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    I liked it, the lyrics were decent. All in all I thought it was really good.

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    Reminds me of The Eden Project a bit. Not a massive fan of the style but I guess it's all good. If I'm honest it got a bit boring but it's probably just me thinking that. gj.


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    Not bad. You should start doing this more often. I loved the beginning. Very nice beats. Maybe in the rap parts, don't want to sound mean or bad or whatever, but you seem so... " dead", like you're just reading a text you know? It is great and I really like it, but with the rap parts you sound so... strange. But for the rest it is very good. The lyrics are great too.

    EDIT: Just read that this is the first time that you sang a song. To be honest that is actually amazing for a first time. Keep it up!
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    It's a really good song. Good job mant his is some good stuff!

     


















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