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  • try to publish it!!

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  • good

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    Small part of story I've been working on

    Hey I've been working on a book and wanted to post a small part of it so ic an get some comments about it. This is only a very very very small part of it though. Plz comment about your opinions



    im going to add the story up to chapter 5 in a second but i need to type it up. It will only be a few minutes until ill have that. Itll be much better i believe if u had a little more of the story
    Last edited by Bargin; 12-09-2009 at 02:40 AM.
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    You already posted this in the Poetry/Gangsta Rap Section, why re-spam?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Yuerno View Post
    You already posted this in the Poetry/Gangsta Rap Section, why re-spam?
    Sorry i didnt know it could have been posted in the general section i forgot the guidelines so i just posted it here again i would have posted it here in the first place but i didnt know i could
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    ITS SO

    BEAUTIFUL

    MAKES ME WANNA PLANT TREES

    no im kidding i didnt even read it

    sorry but i got preso night

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    BURN BABY BURN

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dead Bones Brook View Post
    BURN BABY BURN
    Did u actually read it?
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    Shh, just do it.

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    I want people to actually be serious on this thread please. I would appreciate that if you were
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    I am serious.
    Now go /. (<< also serious)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dead Bones Brook View Post
    I am serious.
    Now go /. (<< also serious)
    did you read it?
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    me and Peter’s high school.
    might want to look at that again doesnt really sound good, could be better by like peters and my Highschool or something idk lol

    good care of you. Pleas. I love you.”
    its please not pleas dude give me the rest i wanna know why mom crying! very very very good story so far man no joke its really really good give me some more lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by BMW M5 View Post
    might want to look at that again doesnt really sound good, could be better by like peters and my Highschool or something idk lol

    its please not pleas dude give me the rest i wanna know why mom crying! very very very good story so far man no joke its really really good give me some more lol
    Thanks I'll be posting the next 2 chapters in little bit. The next 2 chapters will at least triple what ive shown you and theirs a little more revelance in it
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    either give me why she crying and whats gonna happen or i wont read -.-

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    If its not on sparknotes im not reading it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BMW M5 View Post
    either give me why she crying and whats gonna happen or i wont read -.-

    You will figure it out on the next chapters
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