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    Opinion on my video. (SMITE)

    I need some new opinions on this video, for people telling me to use my voice more and get it out there, I think I have done it good this time. Aswell as content, what do you guys think?


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    You have such a great voice for youtube,thumbs up and keep it up

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    >Asking for comment, like, and subscribe

    You know the people that run a 1% critrune on League of Legends? If so, assume that's the part of your viewer audience that will pretty much not care about your channel. If you don't know League or this stupid 1% critrune prophecy of how you spell that word, just assume that alot of people will pretty much avoid you if you ask for a comment/like/sub, since it makes you sound pretty pathetic.

    Overall, pretty smooth voice, there was like that 0.5 seconds short on the intro (try not to immediately say "Hi guys", rather wait a small delay) but overall you could make it far into youtube if you try hard and keep trying to improve yourself on your weaker aspects (which are hard to see here, in a 2 minute video. It's pretty hard to judge for us what you have to work on or not when you have us judge on this kind of videos).
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    Quote Originally Posted by Assistive View Post
    not even 1080p60FPS
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    >Asking for comment, like, and subscribe

    You know the people that run a 1% critrune on League of Legends? If so, assume that's the part of your viewer audience that will pretty much not care about your channel. If you don't know League or this stupid 1% critrune prophecy of how you spell that word, just assume that alot of people will pretty much avoid you if you ask for a comment/like/sub, since it makes you sound pretty pathetic.

    Overall, pretty smooth voice, there was like that 0.5 seconds short on the intro (try not to immediately say "Hi guys", rather wait a small delay) but overall you could make it far into youtube if you try hard and keep trying to improve yourself on your weaker aspects (which are hard to see here, in a 2 minute video. It's pretty hard to judge for us what you have to work on or not when you have us judge on this kind of videos).
    Thanks for the feedback, next video I will refrain from asking for comments, etc. Aswell as wait a little before speaking, as I noticed that was pretty bad

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    D: good video but only gonna upload smite vids?


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    Quote Originally Posted by Dylan View Post


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    Thanks for the feedback, next video I will refrain from asking for comments, etc. Aswell as wait a little before speaking, as I noticed that was pretty bad
    Nah, the slight cut-off in you saying 'hi' in the video is just a very small flaw, people won't bother much with it since even big youtubers sometimes have inperfect audio cuts throughout their videos. Just be more suble with asking for comments, just don't ask for comments just because their comments but more for like "What do you think of XYZ? You can leave your opinion in the comment section, i would greatly appriciate to hear your feedback on this". That sounds alot better than "Leave a comment, like and subscribe, it really helps me out"- alot less desperate, less sudden and people will feel a little important since you want to know their opinion for example. Same with asking someone to like your video, but please do it at the end of the video and of course, do it in a subtle way. It's not wrong if you are a new youtuber to ask directly for people to leave a like if they enjoyed it, just be subtle doing it.

    Subscribers will come automatically and you basically don't have to ask for them. If you post content they want to see, they will subscribe. Of course, since your channel is small it's hard to reach an wide enough audience, but patience and effort will shot .
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rörschach View Post
    D: good video but only gonna upload smite vids?
    Been thinking about it. Will be uploading smite for a little, any suggestions? Kinda wanna stick to a couple games within my channel. Tried doing a open-game channel if you wanna call it that, and failed miserably. I only do SMITE now because I wanna attract people who enjoy smite, but I am open to opinions about what I should play next.

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    If you cut your commentary you would sound so much better. Like cut out the parts where you say: uh or pause for a bit
























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    I mean, you must because you're here commenting?

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    I think you've improved your voice game alot
    What you should work on now is a signature thing for you
    Something typical about you

    Pewdiepie has his weird hands thing
    CSG has his almost neck breaking 'HEY GUYS' thing

    I think an iconic thing like that would help you a bit too

    overall, nice videos, keep it up
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    You have a good voice for YouTube videos. It isn't boring.

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