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    simple and very nice good job..

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    nice but just fix the black part in the start

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    Quote Originally Posted by Troop View Post
    nice but just fix the black part in the start
    yep it should be an intro there, but i was toooo lazaaaay :PPPPPPPPPPP
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    haha very cute

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    Decent.
    Perhaps add an intro
    Btw music starts a bit late.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Antagonist View Post
    Decent.
    Perhaps add an intro
    Btw music starts a bit late.
    im working on an intro right now.
    and the music...
    idk i was just too lazy to fix it :S
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    Too much dead time in the intro (about 5 seconds of black screen with no audio)
    Music should come before the video fading in before, not after the video shows up
    Sniper SFX was too loud.... shouldn't be 2x louder than the music.
    Get rid of black screens on right and left sides, render at a better resolution for Crossfire
    Flash transition doesn't match when you do a fade out before it.
    missed the sfx at 0:25 (every shot should have it)
    fade out the music and the clip together.

    Ratng: 6.5/10
    Improvements expected: Video Resolution Fix, Volume Control and placement, Transmission use, Sound FX repetitivity, Less dead time, better music, improvement on the slowing down ( like at the last clip )
    Color Correction was pretty good, but if you were to make it more like this:

    something like this (try it out)


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    Quote Originally Posted by Jabuuty671 View Post
    Too much dead time in the intro (about 5 seconds of black screen with no audio)
    Music should come before the video fading in before, not after the video shows up
    Sniper SFX was too loud.... shouldn't be 2x louder than the music.
    Get rid of black screens on right and left sides, render at a better resolution for Crossfire
    Flash transition doesn't match when you do a fade out before it.
    missed the sfx at 0:25 (every shot should have it)
    fade out the music and the clip together.

    Ratng: 6.5/10
    Improvements expected: Video Resolution Fix, Volume Control and placement, Transmission use, Sound FX repetitivity, Less dead time, better music, improvement on the slowing down ( like at the last clip )
    Color Correction was pretty good, but if you were to make it more like this:
    YouTube - ‪Colour Correction Tutorial - Like if you want an AE Tut or an advanced CC Tut‬‏
    something like this (try it out)
    YouTube - ‪Sony Vegas Twixtor TUTORIAL + DOWNLOAD‬‏
    oh wow,
    thanks, now i know what i can do better <3
    but as i said, first edit :3
    oh btw. i rendered in HD ? o.o
    Last edited by Uncute; 05-21-2011 at 08:11 PM.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Uncute View Post
    oh wow,
    thanks, now i know what i can do better <3
    but as i said, first edit :3
    oh btw. i rendered in HD ? o.o
    I'm talking about the render size. the resolution of the video.
    like ___x___


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    Quote Originally Posted by Jabuuty671 View Post

    I'm talking about the render size. the resolution of the video.
    like ___x___
    its 1920x1080 o.o
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    Very simple. You need more effects. It's to boring.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Uncute View Post
    its 1920x1080 o.o
    To fit youtubes screen? even at 1080p, it retains the black bars

    Quote Originally Posted by MellowHype View Post
    Very simple. You need more effects. It's to boring.
    sometimes simplicity is the beast.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Jabuuty671 View Post

    To fit youtubes screen? even at 1080p, it retains the black bars


    sometimes simplicity is the beast.
    Well i didn't like it. I need something to WOW me.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MellowHype View Post
    Well i didn't like it. I need something to WOW me.


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    WOW!!!!!!!!!!
    This is what i'm talking about!!!

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