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    I don't want to sound mean, but it's the truth. sorry i can't tone it down to a 'softer' understanding. Just the way i judge.


    Over-used shadow border effect
    scrolling text is a very ugly color. the purple and yellow don't match.
    Don't use drop shadow on text .
    don't use that sun rays effect too.

    you used 3 horrible effects in 1 minute seconds (no offense)
    also, intro's should never be more than 1/4th the length of a montage. your intro was already 1/2
    next time, don't keep 1 free camera clip of you going around the map, make it like a track-dolley like scrolling around the map split into different clips
    the intro would've been better with C4D text or just text on the walls, without the black shadow outline, without the sun ray fx, and without the single shot


    You need to get new sniper SFX (sound effect) or stick to the one that came with the game
    the one you put didn't go well with the calming music and you didn't sync it well
    don't put it dead time (like 2+ seconds between kills because it really makes the watchers lose suspense and rids of all wow-factors
    don't ever do that scrolling text again in any montage, it never works out (referring to 1:32)
    don't subtitle what happends in the clip (no scope, quick scope, headshot etc; )
    don't use transitions either, just let the clips go together. the only transitions that should ever be used are fade out, fade in and flash.


    You need to back away from using stock effects of sony vegas
    get new sound effects
    practice syncing better
    killing dead time
    working on fading in and fading out.
    sway away from other transitions
    try to color correct it too (look up some call of duty color correcting tutorials on YT)
    I said Call of Duty because they have good color correction tutorials
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jabuuty671 View Post
    I don't want to sound mean, but it's the truth. sorry i can't tone it down to a 'softer' understanding. Just the way i judge.


    Over-used shadow border effect
    scrolling text is a very ugly color. the purple and yellow don't match.
    Don't use drop shadow on text .
    don't use that sun rays effect too.

    you used 3 horrible effects in 1 minute seconds (no offense)
    also, intro's should never be more than 1/4th the length of a montage. your intro was already 1/2
    next time, don't keep 1 free camera clip of you going around the map, make it like a track-dolley like scrolling around the map split into different clips
    the intro would've been better with C4D text or just text on the walls, without the black shadow outline, without the sun ray fx, and without the single shot


    You need to get new sniper SFX (sound effect) or stick to the one that came with the game
    the one you put didn't go well with the calming music and you didn't sync it well
    don't put it dead time (like 2+ seconds between kills because it really makes the watchers lose suspense and rids of all wow-factors
    don't ever do that scrolling text again in any montage, it never works out (referring to 1:32)
    don't subtitle what happends in the clip (no scope, quick scope, headshot etc; )
    don't use transitions either, just let the clips go together. the only transitions that should ever be used are fade out, fade in and flash.


    You need to back away from using stock effects of sony vegas
    get new sound effects
    practice syncing better
    killing dead time
    working on fading in and fading out.
    sway away from other transitions
    try to color correct it too (look up some call of duty color correcting tutorials on YT)
    I said Call of Duty because they have good color correction tutorials
    /yuso critic though


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    Tips The Into should be like 10 sec to 15 sec.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Antagonist View Post


    /yuso critic though
    Gotta make them Crossfire VFX'ers shine

    Quote Originally Posted by bobman1 View Post
    Tips The Into should be like 10 sec to 15 sec.
    This .


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    5 / 10 Don't mean to offend anyone but here are my reasons.

    One: I wouldn't even call it a montage. There was nothing special or exciting about the gameplay. Just looks like something someone did in 1 game of playing and called it good.

    Two: As you already know. Intro was half of the video. :S

    Three: Could barely read the text.

    and Four: There was no special editing. Try to do something when there's a kill. Like shaking the screen, zooming in / out, blurring, increasing brightness, etc.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Jabuuty671 View Post

    Gotta make them Crossfire VFX'ers shine


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    I shall start up again do want your input


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    After 45 seconds of intro i just gave up.

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    Nice CF montage.




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    Quote Originally Posted by matthew2359 View Post
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    This was posted 25 minutes ago You posted Nice montage at 24 minutes ago.. the Video is 3 minutes long..
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jabuuty671 View Post
    I don't want to sound mean, but it's the truth. sorry i can't tone it down to a 'softer' understanding. Just the way i judge.


    Over-used shadow border effect <<<Okay but I still like the effect
    scrolling text is a very ugly color. the purple and yellow don't match. <<<Text is a week point for me.
    Don't use drop shadow on text . <<< Okay will take note of this
    don't use that sun rays effect too. <<<Yes I admit lens flare kinda failed there

    you used 3 horrible effects in 1 minute seconds (no offense) <<< ok
    also, intro's should never be more than 1/4th the length of a montage. your intro was already 1/2 <<< Yes I know this now.
    next time, don't keep 1 free camera clip of you going around the map, make it
    like a track-dolley like scrolling around the map split into different clips
    <<<Yeah this is what I was already going to do in my next montage
    the intro would've been better with C4D text or just text on the walls, without the black shadow outline, without the sun ray fx, and without the single shot <<< Yeah I'm going to try and track some C4D rendered text in the next one. Crossfire is a pain to track in. since it has bad points to track from


    You need to get new sniper SFX (sound effect) or stick to the one that came with the game <<< It is using the sound effect that's in the game already
    the one you put didn't go well with the calming music and you didn't sync it well<<< I don't want to get into the sound and changing the gun sounds but I will consider this when I get a little better.
    don't put it dead time (like 2+ seconds between kills because it really makes the watchers lose suspense and rids of all wow-factors <<< The sender of the clips didn't give me enough kills to use so it would be very short
    don't ever do that scrolling text again in any montage, it never works out (referring to 1:32) <<< Yeah.
    don't subtitle what happends in the clip (no scope, quick scope, headshot etc; ) <<< I know, it was a stupid choice I made
    don't use transitions either, just let the clips go together. the only transitions that should ever be used are fade out, fade in and flash. <<< Meh I don't like chopping to other clips like that, but I will give it a try I guess.


    You need to back away from using stock effects of sony vegas <<< Na I'm good.
    get new sound effects <<< Na I'm fine with it.
    practice syncing better <<< Could be better I guess but I'm not really going to focus on sound until I'm better.
    killing dead time <<< Yes I'll put in some dolly tracks
    working on fading in and fading out. <<<ok....
    sway away from other transitions <<< Maybe
    try to color correct it too (look up some call of duty color correcting tutorials on YT) <<< Already was using a colour correct and I think it looked good.
    I said Call of Duty because they have good color correction tutorials
    Commented the quote.

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    i like it but i dont see no no scopes xD
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