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    My first ever attempt at a montage

    [YOUTUBE]redeTGVsVCs[/YOUTUBE]

    Let me know what I should work on and etc.

    Also I am willing to help other members by doing edits for them just let me know if your interested but I will try to do a better job than this one..

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    Nice Try For Your First

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    Thanks ^

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    Going to speak the truth here, The intor is Beast, but the rest Is kinda bad.
    Things wrong with it:
    1: you kept The game Sound even while Is slow motion . "Fllllasssshhh Grrrannaddde!"
    2: You Walked around to much, edit out all of that and mainly get the scenes with The kill shots,

    3: Add more effects
    4: dont use a Replay
    Even though i cant even Edit videos, Lol
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    It's okay. Try to add better transitions. And get better gameplay. Also, try to record the game while you're playing instead of recording the replay. It look 10x better that way.

    Edit: It doesn't look as laggy.


    Quote Originally Posted by m_t_h View Post


    By stop playing AVA untill brasilian server comes.

    Do you guys really need to ruin EVERY game?


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    Nice for your first try man
    Whats the song btw?

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    Thanks and yeah I was actually recording from my desktop downstairs and forgot to turn fraps on and didn't want to go through the whole cracking process so I just waited till on my laptop and used replays. And yeah I am still not familiar with all the effects yet so hopefully next time it will be better,

    Song name is keep running theres a video of it on my channel

    but its by dpryde on his new mixtape.

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    lol dpryde FTW
    and its too long D:<


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    Quote Originally Posted by rocalota View Post
    lol dpryde FTW
    and its too long D:<
    Yeah I didn't know how long to make one so I put two games worth of kills into it.

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    3/10 Heres my Reasons.

    If you change the game speed eather cut the sound or leave the slow mo sound in and cut the sped up stuff.
    Second thing. Eww star. Eww bad Res. I also dislike replays.

    But thats just me. Not bad for a first try.


    "Relax its Just Music."




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    Next time record some ingame clips.
    But good job anyway
    Don't let em say you ain't beautiful,
    They can all get fucked just stay true to you!

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    time for jabuuty to judge

    the intro was nice until it showed JUST white text
    keep it colorful, if you need help with that I can see what I can do, and don't use that moving shine effect, it's overused

    it seemed like the game clip audio was only coming out on the right, and the music was coming out on the left? keep it stereo and make it so that they both come out equally on both headphones
    are those nametag hacks? lol
    don't use any sniper sound effect, stick to what Crossfire has, don't edit it.
    don't show dead time, like you sitting hardscoping or walking around with no suspense

    the outro was too basic of 1 color, try a different font and make it colorful like the first few seconds of the intro



    other than that, it was a great first attempt, it wasn't over-edit

    Don't use transitions, don't use sniper sound effects, don't use any video effects but Color Correction and simple transitions like fade in and fade out. try a different song that'll fit well with a video game.
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    I say use some diff music, take out the sound from game. I lol'd at the first kill, cf has such bad reg.. Nice vid tho.

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    It's a descent first try, it would be tremendously better if the video quality was better

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    Well, since it's your first montage, I'm gonna go with ok.

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