Imo, gameplay was lame. If you can't receive good gameplay, then what's the point of trying to make a montage out of it?
Editing was poinless and boring, looks like you just threw it all together and put a song over it.
EDIT: Why did you fly over all the maps? We know what the maps look like, we don't need to see them again. It's not original, if you're looking to impress throw something new in there.