I like the lip sync for the few words. I like the mix up, even if the second half was blurred with fades. But using blue stahli, thats i guess to be expected with the song choice.
What you should change:
1. Less fades/mashes. Its fine if you put a whole ton of anime in one amv(most people do MEPs for that sort of thing though). The problem with mashing is that your amv is the quality of animation goes down a shitload, especially for youtube. Its not a bad amv, but the original quality goes down a lot when you put so many fades in.
2. Try focusing on one anime at a time. Mutiple anime is fine, but focus on one at a time. It would probably help if you didn't put a little space between clips too.
3. Join a MEP group. Post your amvs on amvnews.org, work with other people. If your doing a mashup, it would be better for you to do your own bit and then have other people do theirs.
Also, The lelouch/deathkid/naruto clips don't go well at all in the start. Of all the kara no Kyoukai clips, i wouldn't pick that one. Maybe the shiki spinning kills int he 5th movie, or even when she gets mad in the 3rd. I wouldn't use the madoka running clip right after the HOTD.
The D.Gray man combo is a good idea, just need a better quality clip of that.
For this amv, i would have probably put in Cannan's opening bit somewhere, or a Black Lagoon clip.
What the hells Cannan, o-o What animes that?
BTW, do you think OST's from an anime, can be used to make an AMV of THAT anime?
Eg. random example, Naruto opening for naruto amv, o-o
Also, why wouldn't you put the running after the HOTD, I put it there because the lyrics said face and stuff o-o. But please explain so i can avoid something similar in amvs to come.
Canaan? The anime with the white haired chick who has synesthasia or whatnot? Its a 6(?) episode anime "type-moon".
Well sure, but REALLY depends on the anime's OST. For instance MOST of the OST amv's not featuring the original anime are parody.
But using something that is not like OH HEY ITS ONE PIECE or something, is fine. Unless.....its too popular. For the sountrack i'd probably focus on the non openings.
The madoka part was "fast" for the slow HOTD part.