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    Smile My second try.

    I tried to take into account all the criticism I got from my last try, and fix it up in this image so please be as honest as you would like to be, I will take it on board, btw this is my last upload of this image, next will probably be a drawing or something I find interesting,

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    thank you for supporting me with my last upload, much appreciated!

    The second image is the original. (it was requested I put this in.)
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    Looks very good
    I might try and creating images one day when i get a decent computer there seems to be a fair amount of tutorials

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    please add last thread to your post so new people could see. I like it but I think its a little stuffed

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    I couldn't link the thread so instead I have linked the original image.

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    Uploading a new picture soon.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AceOfNinjas View Post
    Looks very good
    I might try and creating images one day when i get a decent computer there seems to be a fair amount of tutorials
    Good luck when you start man!

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    The logo of the first is really good, but not the background.
    Maybe go for logo1 on background 2, will be smoother and all

    We can still see the pixels on the letters on the 2nd logo, that's ugly betty.


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    You should try using higher resolution images and it would look much better.

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    looks a lot better, just a bit blurry around lettering
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