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    Daily Art! Day 2



    Hope you guys enjoy as always!

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    There's a bit too much negative space for my liking, and the text seems a bit obscured and ill-placed.
    Other than that though, it's rather good.

    I am the seer in the dark,
    the vagabond of yore,
    valediction.
    I am the sum of all your parts,
    and proprietor of all.
    A miasma,
    the conclusion,
    blackmonger of Inlé,
    valediction.
    Synapses fray,
    my form now vivid,
    as torpor sets and blood grows tepid.
    With every ounce of flesh now offered,
    I hold your corpse within my coffers.
    Knitted cells now split asunder,
    stand alongside me brother.
    Take your place amongst my Owsla,
    we march at dawn now and forever.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Aborted View Post
    There's a bit too much negative space for my liking, and the text seems a bit obscured and ill-placed.
    Other than that though, it's rather good.

    I always enjoy the C&C, thank you Aborted <3

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    I like the piece overall but i do not like the glossy look (Gaucasion blur on lighten or whatever layer style) it kills the whole vibe

    It also looks a bit over blured and your focal gets lost in the background, try to bring him out abit.


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