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    FracturedZ

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    I honestly don't have much to say about these.. This is what I end up going to when I become bored..

    "You talk like a drunk man walks: in every direction but where he be headed."

    “You mean that it’s not only what he does that makes him dangerous, but also what he feels justified in doing?”

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    The first one is better, the fractures contrast better.

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    My largest quip would be that the fractures don't flow very well with the lower layers.
    The depth is off, as they appear to move too far from the base layer.
    I am the seer in the dark,
    the vagabond of yore,
    valediction.
    I am the sum of all your parts,
    and proprietor of all.
    A miasma,
    the conclusion,
    blackmonger of Inlé,
    valediction.
    Synapses fray,
    my form now vivid,
    as torpor sets and blood grows tepid.
    With every ounce of flesh now offered,
    I hold your corpse within my coffers.
    Knitted cells now split asunder,
    stand alongside me brother.
    Take your place amongst my Owsla,
    we march at dawn now and forever.


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    The contrast hits me like knifes in the eyes. Sudden color transitions like those are too agressive for the viewer, you must work it, for example, select the shapes there and feather them, it will help a bit to soften, but there's much more to do alright...
    Not reall y able to help you much more though...
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    It helps enough knowing what kills the overall composition, thank you guys @gamer4evere @Aborted & @Player X

    "You talk like a drunk man walks: in every direction but where he be headed."

    “You mean that it’s not only what he does that makes him dangerous, but also what he feels justified in doing?”

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    First one is better TBH