A lot better than the last tag posted. Lighting is getting better, although it should be toned down a-bit as this much of it can draw away from the focal. Which is the case with a lot of things in this tag.
The way you decided to put text on this image also takes away from the focal, as it covers the whole tag, including the render. It's almost as if you were trying to make the text the focal point, because that's what my eyes are attracted to instead of the render. If you were to tone down the purple shit coming from the sides, and move the text down a few pixels, I believe it would look fine.
There are a couple spots on the backside of the girl that the relative lighting is a bit off, but overall it's fine. There's decent depth, and everything seems to blend together somewhat nicely. The only thing that really bothers me about this tag is the drastic light differences. In the bottom left, and top right it's almost black. But in the center, it's almost white. Try to make the lighting changes in the tag less drastic, but definitely still noticeable. You just have to find the sweetspot.
Other than that, I like it. Good job.