I think that the girl is too immersed on the shadows. If she were to pop up more (for example, working with a white layer on some parts to make the face come to the first plane, and try to do something about the pixelated green item right under her LEFT leg. appart from that its good. a 8/10
Actually everyting now looks a bit oversharpened but some elements like the green cross shaped item bug me the most.
her arms as well.