trying new style

Here it is ironman!

https://img47.imageshack.us/img47/8952/iromnamfx6.png

the rneder looks weird...looks wider than it should be

other then that?

i like it, its kool

the render is a little awkward. although the c4d in the backgorund (i think its a c4d that has filter/twirl and a filter/glass then distort it would seem.) anyway its confusing how the black edges on the right side smoothly enter the sig, where on the left its a black spot with no edges. it kind of overlaps. has a good flow though