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it looks nice. but i dun like that it is B&W, and i dont like bottom right corner.
IMO it needs a very small white border.Only IMO..

7/10

Thanks for the advice.

Mmm.. I think you've over lensflared it, it looks too complicated IMO, I think you need to also try other effects like smudging around focal or just add some good C4D's in and try some filters and see what happens.
Need to improve on text as well.
Good Work.

yeah its pretty nice shit
good job
text is ok?

B&W=bad
its a little grainy but thats okay.
The uhm lines (i guess) on the right of him, i would remove them
And the lighting needs to be fixed up a little

thats pretty cool imo