v1.
[IMG]https://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/JustDance.png[/IMG]
v2.
[IMG]https://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/JustDance-1.png[/IMG]
/discuss :D
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v1.
[IMG]https://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/JustDance.png[/IMG]
v2.
[IMG]https://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/JustDance-1.png[/IMG]
/discuss :D
too much different colors? boh1
Previous lighting better, text is worse.
Compo ?
Keep original, I'd like to have the PSD and see if I can maybe fix this up a bit if that's fine with you.
While on the other hand fecher's didn't appeal to my eyes very much the text which, totally unessecary, was included isn't executed very well and not easy on the eyes to look at and understand what the text says it has too much going on
Also the way the lighting was done was in a very simplistic way and at least to me doesn't look real it looks like something is casting a shadow over everything
I think the colors are too demanding trying to incorporate so many different colors and not using them tactically, most times, look bad and this was the case here there is too large of a range of colors that don't really work well with each other
Adding this to how there is no depth and how simply blurring a background isn't enough to achieve a good perception of depth in a tag I don't really like it very much personally but I would have to say that it has some good parts like the composition the composition in the piece is definitely good though that's not fundamental enough to make the piece good
This
Low quality. Too much going on and it's hurting my eyes.
v2.
I love the "graffiti" style.
@fecher Choose the first with the write of the second, and put sekero upper of the left arm of the dancer (up-right)
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ryguy
Here you go
https://www.m-e-d-i-a-f-i-r-e.com/?p17o7vhe58auk5k
take out the "-" in the url
v1 looks REAL
v2 Little bit of fake/cartoonish (hand, pants, etc.)
Quote:
Originally Posted by Heath Ledger
Yeah it was the type of layer i put it on, i think vivid light ^^ i thought it looked pretty cool ( personal preference ) then fixed the lighting in v2 and put some more affects and use the dodge and burn took on some of the background and effects.