this sucks dick but he a gay fish aha
Type: Posts; User: ShAg12345
this sucks dick but he a gay fish aha
ehhh it ok
8.5/10 i really like it man nice job
um pretty daym good man i liked it alot ahah
ehhh ok not my pace tho but keep it up
i dont care if it sucked haha you just dont know shit at all dude i wanna see what your ass can come up with ill freestyle you over a mic you ****** ok
hahah all fuckin poetry aint AABB rhyme scheme once again your fail ok so stfu befor you criticizes man alright know a lill your dumb ass
are all fuckin retarted all rap or poetry dont have to rhyme your dumb asses its called FREE VERSE wow you all fuckin fail
haah aight its cool with me so what others here think?
[/COLOR]this is my life
so daym deceased
this is my life
i no longer breath
this pain we fell
can never be left unaware
it never hurts to kill
i will never bare
true but sometimes some of the greatest stuff doesnt have to ryhme man =)
im trying to find some beats and shit but i cant rap worth a shit so idk haha
ok i like it man i take back what i said its actualy pretty good =) took me a min to understand thats why but its good tho
yea you think i cant write intacate shit well i wrote that in 12 mins so have fun your turn now kid =)/orly
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ok i dont make 2 acct ****** the other one got banned and its unbanned like 3 weeks ago i just never felt like gettin back on it so stfu n blow me alright and your shit dont get stolen you just...
you can smd all night kid i have a msn and a mic we can freestyle later you ****** aight and i will record it and see whos better and let mpgh think i dont need you to write it i wanna see if you can...
woah kid i will destroy you in a freestyle any day ok really i will so if you wanna lets freestyle over the mic and lets see whos better ******
well good luck with that
no shit eqlipse6 mainstream aint even good besides eminem that it and a few other like biggie and pac thats it then its underground but his shit is stolen i believe to thieving i Googled your shit...
daym he got owned but i dont do that stuff next gen and u know it so everything i do it straight mine and mine only =)
hahahahahhahhahah it sucks but its ok man u aint rappin your tellin a story witch is cool but its ok man
your officialy a dumb ass kid trust me hackers never brag about what they hack and never talk about it over the internet you dumb ass wow i hope you do get caught cause your a fucking retard ok...
try n get it to flow better on paper and it will sound hella good on the mic ya know
ehhhhhhhh ok could use some work
i hate all you simplistically minded people
believe it or not i am very peaceful
this anger i feel can i conceal
this adrenalin rush is never enough
bad ass people pointin guns are lethal
but i...
hahahah funny shit dude