Can I have some feedback on this Video Edit? [CSGO]

[Z-Nation]

So uh. @Sander The Panda @Blake @Xiolest @Cohen

How's this? An Improvement?

The video is good, it just seems to have a little to much of a shine to it. And to agree with Sander The Panda; Work on the sync a little.

[Charion]

Are you on about the footsteps? Those were added, can be removed.

No, watch your video again, your first clip has everything out of sync.

[lockedalt]

From the T side of the video there was some awkwardly snappy camera glitches, That's really all

[Dee]

No, watch your video again, your first clip has everything out of sync.

Not sure what you mean, the clickbacks of the AWP were added for effect, almost as if he is "readying" for the shot. Can you point out exact seconds?

[Charion]

Not sure what you mean, the clickbacks of the AWP were added for effect, almost as if he is "readying" for the shot. Can you point out exact seconds?

The whole first clip mate, and partly the second clip too, I can hear how out of the sync it is, the clip and your so said effect. There is no specific time stamp, just listen your video as a whole and you'll hear it eventually.

Here's a little time stamp if you really want, listen VERY closely (headsets or headphones on) + 100% volume and listen, the time stamp is, where the first terrorist is killed by the awp-er shots.

[Dee]

The whole first clip mate, and partly the second clip too, I can hear how out of the sync it is, the clip and your so said effect. There is no specific time stamp, just listen your video as a whole and you'll hear it eventually.

Here's a little time stamp if you really want, listen VERY closely (headsets or headphones on) + 100% volume and listen, the time stamp is, where the first terrorist is killed by the awp-er shots.

Again, I can't exactly hear what your on about. I did notice that when it hits first person and the T is killed theres a second AWP shot that shouldn't be there. The footsteps are slighty out of sync and can be removed/edited. While the first shot looks good to me it can be improved by delaying the shot a couple frames. Thanks for the feedback.

What about the second clip? Pros/cons, would you prefer more like the second one or the first?

I don't know If I can grasp the editing skills that people have today, I will definitely attempt too over the course of my editing but for some reason I feel pulled to the simple clean edits like the second clip...

[Blake]

So uh. @Sander The Panda @Blake @Xiolest @Cohen

How's this? An Improvement?

What's the first song name(of the edit, not the intro)

[Xiolest]

So uh. @Sander The Panda @Blake @Xiolest @Cohen

How's this? An Improvement?

I like it it's good, the transition from one clip to another is off, especially with the music which throws it off. But keep going at it I know you will improve on it.

[Charion]

Again, I can't exactly hear what your on about. I did notice that when it hits first person and the T is killed theres a second AWP shot that shouldn't be there. The footsteps are slighty out of sync and can be removed/edited. While the first shot looks good to me it can be improved by delaying the shot a couple frames. Thanks for the feedback.

What about the second clip? Pros/cons, would you prefer more like the second one or the first?

I don't know If I can grasp the editing skills that people have today, I will definitely attempt too over the course of my editing but for some reason I feel pulled to the simple clean edits like the second clip...

All in all, please do not use any effects, because it might look confusing to some people like it did just for me.

Its a long shot for you honestly, I wish you a best of luck and I will be looking forward for your future edits.
Also, give a try for after effects, it makes the video 10 times better