Dark shit yo

[Gaar]

I'm not sure how I feel about this one. Some part of this are fucked up but I think in general it looks alright.
CnC if you wish, any comments good or bad are appreciated. Took a little bit more time with the picture this time.



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[Cloud Anarchy]

I love the idea but i hate his face and his left arm >.<.But overall it looks great imo.

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What is the yellow-brown-peach pen's brand?

[setsuna818]

Looks pretty good. But yeah, if you were wondering what's off, i think it might be have to do with the eyes (they should be located a little lower and usually be around mid portion of the face) Also the left shoulder height might be a little off. I prefer buying a wooden manikin for reference if you find yourself feeling weird on what's wrong with the picture.

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

Not bad at all dude, I'd just be aware of line work on your next project and practice anatomical correctness.
The most obvious flaws with the line work for me is looking at the bottom of his shoes, lines are a bit off there.
Anatomy wise, I'd say work on hands and fingers. For me, those are the toughest parts to draw on a person.
Nice work though, keep at it.

[Fucking Moron]

I like the drawing, tho I feel like if it wasn't a anime character it could haev more emotion to it. As people can relate to people easier then they can to a cartoon.
But I really like how the shadow is.
I think somethign that would make this cooler is if the shadow was a more of a monster shape, to show the guys "inner demons."

Also his left arm needs to be thicker in the bicep, tricep region and it probably could be bent a little more near the elbow.
That's it @Gaar
good work tho
7.5/10

[DreamEspera]

nice, could be better in details but impressing.

[Vice]

Good from me keep it up

[Wave]

pretty nice

[Gaar]

What is the yellow-brown-peach pen's brand?

They are micron multiliners.

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I love the idea but i hate his face and his left arm >.<.But overall it looks great imo.

Yeah there a little messed up :/

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Looks pretty good. But yeah, if you were wondering what's off, i think it might be have to do with the eyes (they should be located a little lower and usually be around mid portion of the face) Also the left shoulder height might be a little off. I prefer buying a wooden manikin for reference if you find yourself feeling weird on what's wrong with the picture.

When I think back on it I think I could have done the face better but I didn't. And I think that the left shoulder looks fine to me.

[Wave]

what marker brand is that? @Gaar

[Gaar]

Not bad at all dude, I'd just be aware of line work on your next project and practice anatomical correctness.
The most obvious flaws with the line work for me is looking at the bottom of his shoes, lines are a bit off there.
Anatomy wise, I'd say work on hands and fingers. For me, those are the toughest parts to draw on a person.
Nice work though, keep at it.

Thanks for the cnc, I'm always working on getting the correct shapes. But I have to agree that the shoe lines are a bit off and fingers are just hard af to draw.

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what marker brand is that? @Gaar

I use Coptic markers and microns

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I like the drawing, tho I feel like if it wasn't a anime character it could haev more emotion to it. As people can relate to people easier then they can to a cartoon.
But I really like how the shadow is.
I think somethign that would make this cooler is if the shadow was a more of a monster shape, to show the guys "inner demons."

Also his left arm needs to be thicker in the bicep, tricep region and it probably could be bent a little more near the elbow.
That's it @Gaar
good work tho
7.5/10

My style is in "manga" or whatever. That's just how I draw stuff, although I'll work on giving my drawings more depth. Imo the arm looks fine, the character doesn't need to have that much visible muscles. Thanks for cnc

[Wave]

I use Coptic markers and microns

oh damn those are really nice my friend has 2 but he wont let me have one 8((

[Gaar]

oh damn those are really nice my friend has 2 but he wont let me have one 8((

Comic markers are also like $8 each so I can see why he wouldn't let you. I really do recommend them, even thought i don't normally do colour they are also good for that as well.

[Wave]

Comic markers are also like $8 each so I can see why he wouldn't let you. I really do recommend them, even thought i don't normally do colour they are also good for that as well.

its like 90 dollars for 12 .-.