Cmon i wanna battle sum1

[jackpoop]

Dont judge me on my name lol

[Einstein2.0]

Kick a verse...I'm game

[jackpoop]

Kick a verse...I'm game

LOl lemme try idk im kinda new tell me improvemeants pliz tx here i go

I call out what i see
when i look at you all i see is beuaty
reppin all this shit i feel like a cat stuck in a tree
dont know how to get down i count 1-2-3
first im gone then im back
michael jackson was better black
my life is like a freethrow commin off my man shaq
sucks dont it
but bitch im only here for a moment <- idk i think this is sum eminem shit lol

made this up in like 3 mins has no meaning watsoever. Its jus what im thinkin about

[Gilcrow]

So here's my little 8 bar statement Call me mistaken.
I see lyrics on here but the talent seems vacant
don't claim to be the best, cause boy you're mistaken
I take my time, coz this is a game of patience
I leave you to produce whack shit in your basement
thinking you're the shit yet you never get payment
you ain't changed your clothes in days and your trainers are ancient
Just get in a shower, I can't tolerate your fragrance

~Gilcrow

[ShAg123]

So here's my little 8 bar statement Call me mistaken.
I see lyrics on here but the talent seems vacant
don't claim to be the best, cause boy you're mistaken
I take my time, coz this is a game of patience
I leave you to produce whack shit in your basement
thinking you're the shit yet you never get payment
you ain't changed your clothes in days and your trainers are ancient
Just get in a shower, I can't tolerate your fragrance

~Gilcrow

thats 4 bars 8 lines lmfao other then that its cool

[HiddenoO]

So here's my little 8 bar statement Call me mistaken.
I see lyrics on here but the talent seems vacant
don't claim to be the best, cause boy you're mistaken
I take my time, coz this is a game of patience
I leave you to produce whack shit in your basement
thinking you're the shit yet you never get payment
you ain't changed your clothes in days and your trainers are ancient
Just get in a shower, I can't tolerate your fragrance

~Gilcrow

Just jizzed in my pants.

[Jabuuty671]

Come at me brosef

[๖ۣۜKlink]

jackpoop...
jk xD

So here's my little 8 bar statement Call me mistaken.
I see lyrics on here but the talent seems vacant
don't claim to be the best, cause boy you're mistaken
I take my time, coz this is a game of patience
I leave you to produce whack shit in your basement
thinking you're the shit yet you never get payment
you ain't changed your clothes in days and your trainers are ancient
Just get in a shower, I can't tolerate your fragrance

~Gilcrow

HOLY SHIT. EPIC

[Dracconus]

So here's my little 8 bar statement Call me mistaken.
I see lyrics on here but the talent seems vacant
don't claim to be the best, cause boy you're mistaken
I take my time, coz this is a game of patience
I leave you to produce whack shit in your basement
thinking you're the shit yet you never get payment
you ain't changed your clothes in days and your trainers are ancient
Just get in a shower, I can't tolerate your fragrance

~Gilcrow

It's quite funny that you say that you can't tolerate my fragrance,
'Cuz last time that I checked you were the one that was ancient.
It amazes me still that you're here tryin' to kick it,
So I guess I'll have to take your script and flip it.
So listen closely to the lyrics, that are spewing in this topic,
But don't dare try to challenge, there's no way that you can top it.
It's irrelevant, I'm rappin for the hell of it,
There's no way that you can shake it
So go ahead, and give me payment.
For the teachings I disperse,
This rap shit's not rehearsed.
Didn't you know that jumping on me will get you clowned on,
Your fake ass rhyming is now frowned on
so leave now, disappear before I put you in a hearse.

[[MPGH]Hero]

It's quite funny that you say that you can't tolerate my fragrance,
'Cuz last time that I checked you were the one that was ancient.
It amazes me still that you're here tryin' to kick it,
So I guess I'll have to take your script and flip it.
So listen closely to the lyrics, that are spewing in this topic,
But don't dare try to challenge, there's no way that you can top it.
It's irrelevant, I'm rappin for the hell of it,
There's no way that you can shake it
So go ahead, and give me payment.
For the teachings I disperse,
This rap shit's not rehearsed.
Didn't you know that jumping on me will get you clowned on,
Your fake ass rhyming is now frowned on
so leave now, disappear before I put you in a hearse.

Forget you, Im about to wack your face
beat you, own you, make you displace
sent you right outta here from NY to outer space

bow down to your new duke, you got one more chance
else ima be the better one and leave you with no stance
sent you right outta here, Toronto to France

Im gonna eliminate you, operation undergo
My thoughts will make sure all your kids won't grow

[Left'Nut]

HERO
I'll give you a try...Even though its not worth my time.
Nigga stop bullshittin about states and countries.
You have no flow of rap.
do you even get the meaning of rap?
we all know what countries and states are.
we dont need another rebbeca black here, from "toronto to france"
bitch take this wack sht to somewhere else.
what comes next vancouver to germany.
take a second to accept defeat.
because im done here.
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I tried lol, even though I suck at rapping.... hopefully that got you or something...
No hard feelings.

[Dracconus]

@Hero (Cuz that Left'Nut guys rap is weaker than vanilla Ice's )
Listen I'm glad that you're here giving me your input,
Unfortunately for you it's just as useless as a dead foot.
Your rappin's tight, that one I'll have to give you,
But you're on the wrong website go watch more Gilligan on Hulu.
You see you think you may have owned me,
But the bottom line is this.
The only thing that you own currently
Is your clothes that smell like piss.
So while we're bringing up your past,
and the habits that have ended.
Let me take this broken rap,
And find a way to mend it.