the truth

[[MP][GH]]

stop, before you walk throught that door you have to realize whats at stake and dont make that miSTAKE because all you want is revenge of the one that took thee life of another young blood, but only when you reilised that im only fifteen years old, man how did you get here, man fuck that this shits gone way to far but as you enterd your car with the laying bodie in the trunk you said to your self, what am i doing maybe i should drive off the bridge, but waite the letters in this car and your the only one reading this but oh well your in the air now, this must just be FATE... but if it was then that makes us the enemys this isnt a game because this may just be it for most but not those that read this because its FATE

[Katie_Perry]

Not bad, but put it into stanzas?

[BARON]

Not bad, but put it into stanzas?

I AGree,That's Not As Appealing If I Have Too Read It Together