Gonna start doing anime reviews on my Youtube. Here's my first one.

[Dylan]

Let me know what you guys think, should I continue with a series like this, and do more anime stuff in the future?

[FoxHunter]

Omg thank you for let me know about this anime! Sounds so but soooooo goooooooood to me! Arigato!

[Empire]

Try writing a script for what you are going to say.

[Takatsuki]

Let me know what you guys think, should I continue with a series like this, and do more anime stuff in the future?

Just a few tips;

-You used uhm quite a bit. It's okay to just not say anything for a second.
-Like empire said, write a script. You were all over the place and I couldnt really catch your train of thought.
-Voice is too monotone. I have a fairly monotone voice too, but that changes when you speak louder. Add more emotion, and maybe an ost to the background of what you're saying.

Giving something a 10/10, you should list some sort of quality factors. I'm not a huge fan of x/10 ratings, since the numbers have no meaning. What's the difference between a 6 and a 7? In my perspective, nothing. Instead, maybe a small bulletin list of shit you enjoyed.

>OST; Music was . . . ..
>Visuals; The art . . . .
etc..

not bad for a first review tho

[Dylan]

Try writing a script for what you are going to say.

I will be sure to do that next time it was easier to read off of something.

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Just a few tips;

-You used uhm quite a bit. It's okay to just not say anything for a second.
-Like empire said, write a script. You were all over the place and I couldnt really catch your train of thought.
-Voice is too monotone. I have a fairly monotone voice too, but that changes when you speak louder. Add more emotion, and maybe an ost to the background of what you're saying.

Giving something a 10/10, you should list some sort of quality factors. I'm not a huge fan of x/10 ratings, since the numbers have no meaning. What's the difference between a 6 and a 7? In my perspective, nothing. Instead, maybe a small bulletin list of shit you enjoyed.

>OST; Music was . . . ..
>Visuals; The art . . . .
etc..

not bad for a first review tho

Thanks for the tips, ill be sure to make changes in my next review

[JacketJr]

You should name your channel "TheWeabuWarrior" because weeb life right?

[Empire]

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I will be sure to do that next time it was easier to read off of something.

I say this because usually in everybody's first time they get nervous so they state something real short, give it a rating, say you liked it, and that's it.


Now I'm not saying you should possess the editing level, but just take a look at his wording:


For anime GRarkada and Demolition D (douchebagchocolate) are really good for examples/learning.

[CrazyJani]

Fine for a first review but you really need to make a script.

Looking forward to your review of Shinmai Maou. I (and many others) think it's utter trash so I'd like to know how come you've given it a 10 on MAL.