Otherwise all looks good on my end
Otherwise all looks good on my end
Summarized CNC
Language: 9/10
The language is very understandable making it good.
Font: 4/10
I find that certain sections of your work are very hard to read because the font is so small, unreadable or doesn't stand out from the background;
- First banner with your logo the text was hard to read, I had to look more closely to see what it actually said instead of just looking at it and understanding it. Also under it, the text saying 'Hi, I'm...' did not stand out because it colour!
- Pricing section I could not see the text under 'pricing' because it was too small, shadow too thick and not readable.
- Terms and Conditions section had the same problem with the text being too small, shadow too thick and non readable.
Colour: 4/10
Again certain sections of your work does not cooperate well with your font and the colour of your font.
Last edited by Asap; 12-15-2015 at 10:50 PM.
MPGH History:
Member - 07 July 2014
Donator - 10 January 2015
Donation to the 'Publicist Team' - 23 December 2015
it's aight.
a bit to "bright" for my liking. but can't please everyone.
Schuba is my main nigga.
Updated First post with new edited version.
Thanks for the feedback. I've fixed the font and background colour.
Thanks for the detailed review. I've tried to fix everything you've listed. Made fonts bigger and a little more easier to read with colour contrast. I realised I had f.lux on the entire time, so it was was easier to read on my screen.
Lol. I was going for a happy type of vybe.
I like it.
Yeah, now the contrast has improved but the text under 'pricing' is still too small and the font under your TOS gave my eyes autism.
As for your first banner with your logo and all, might I suggest stroke instead of shadow... See how it looks after :P
Edit: Also under 'pricing' try make that text bigger and instead of shadow, try stroke
Last edited by Asap; 12-16-2015 at 12:41 AM.
MPGH History:
Member - 07 July 2014
Donator - 10 January 2015
Donation to the 'Publicist Team' - 23 December 2015
I feel like the arrows in the"how it works" section are a little too close to the text, plus the text is kind of "cheap", it gives a friendly feel more than a professional feel ( this can be positive ).
The examples' watermarks are a tad too marked for my taste.
The closing section has blurs that you used nowhere else in the image, it looks like it could use some improvement.
Lastly, in your TOS, i've put two spaces in between "given" and "time", 4th row and the last image, below skype and mpgh PM, is not centered: it's a few pixels to the left.
Hope that helps. =)
Schuba is my main nigga.
Sentences like "discuss how you want the design" and "i send you the file" sound "bro" not "pro", if you know what i mean.
If you said "Once the payment is complete the file will be delivered to you" that would sound much more professional than "i send you the file".
It's not necessarily a negative thing, as i said, it lets the message get through in a friendly manner. =)