fallout 3

[MaraFaraCZ]

Just another try...
v.1

v.2

[Brizingir]

Text is nice.
Add flow.
The green brushes..they dont suit, dont blend with the stock,cuz the stock is darker.

[Trunky Back-up]

Totally Agreed with Ali. Couldn't have put it better, myself.

[MaraFaraCZ]

i dont know what is flow xD

[Ryan]

The bg is good, but don't rely on brushes too much.
They're useful, but not a crutch.
6/10.

[Obey]

First one. Don't like the blur on the second one.

[guza44_44]

i like the creative text and all but it seems you just added light over an image, not much look going on

[Nicckk]

Why do I see lots of sigs with the House style text?

You know the square around the first letter. Anyways, what was said before. Personally to me it just looks like a stock and brushes, but it's nice .

[SupB]

Text is nice.
Add flow.
The green brushes..they dont suit, dont blend with the stock,cuz the stock is darker.

This seems like a good comment to start from.
I see you tried creating a flow with the brushes, but the flow with the gun and stuff is pointing upwards so you might want to follow that as a genearl rule.
The green brushes don't fit true, try incorporating more effects, C4D's are really helpful.

[MaraFaraCZ]

Thanks i am still newbie :S