Internship Report

[Averagent]

Hello everyone,

I had to do an internship related to desktop publishing (DTP) and graphic design, I had to make a report about it. So because I'm doing a study called DTP and want to do graphic design next year I made a layout for my report. I'm curious about others their opinion about it, so I want to ask here for some feedback. The report is written in Dutch but it's not about the spelling it's about the layout and design only.

You can find my internship report as PDF file right here: dioncreations.com/uploads/Stageverslag.pdf

I hope this isn't related to advertisement, either way if it is, I wasn't suppose to. Just want some feedback so I can improve myself.

I'm not sure if I posted it in the right section, because this might also belong in "Galleries" or "Showroom", if it belongs there please move it.

Kind regards,

Dion.

[TechnologyZ]

Please have someone double-check your grammar and typo's. I think it is unprofessional to make mistakes in something you would like to be proud of.
For instance: "Scholen & Stages
Ik ben begonnen op R.K.B.S. de Sprong een roomskatholieke basisschool.
Vanaf daar ben ik naar het VMBO gegaan dat toen AOC Leeuwarden
hete. "

A better version would be this:
"Scholen & Stages
Ik ben begonnen op R.K.B.S. de Sprong, een Rooms-Katholieke basisschool.
Vanaf de Sprong ben ik naar het VMBO gegaan, dat toen der tijd AOC Leeuwarden
heette. "

I dont know how much you value these things in your report. Other than that, it looks nice and clean.

[FlexGod]

lol I actually tried to read it and it took me a bit to realize it was in dutch(I think)

[Averagent]

Please have someone double-check your grammar and typo's. I think it is unprofessional to make mistakes in something you would like to be proud of.
For instance: "Scholen & Stages
Ik ben begonnen op R.K.B.S. de Sprong een roomskatholieke basisschool.
Vanaf daar ben ik naar het VMBO gegaan dat toen AOC Leeuwarden
hete. "

A better version would be this:
"Scholen & Stages
Ik ben begonnen op R.K.B.S. de Sprong, een Rooms-Katholieke basisschool.
Vanaf de Sprong ben ik naar het VMBO gegaan, dat toen der tijd AOC Leeuwarden
heette. "

I dont know how much you value these things in your report. Other than that, it looks nice and clean.

Thank you for your feedback, I'll will change it right away.

lol I actually tried to read it and it took me a bit to realize it was in dutch(I think)

Dutch isn't the best language to learn. It is not the easiest language either. But it's funny you tried

[Fate]

Nice work bro, I guess you used InDesign
I would change the grey to white, or at least some different shade of grey (try some more blue-ish shade of grey), doesn't make the stuff pop-up.
Overall great work.

[Averagent]

Nice work bro, I guess you used InDesign
I would change the grey to white, or at least some different shade of grey (try some more blue-ish shade of grey), doesn't make the stuff pop-up.
Overall great work.

Thank you for the feedback, I will look into it.

Yes, I used InDesign and Photoshop to change the images to CMYK and 300 PPI so when it's ready it can be printed around 100 times.

[Fate]

Thank you for the feedback, I will look into it.

Yes, I used InDesign and Photoshop to change the images to CMYK and 300 PPI so when it's ready it can be printed around 100 times.

Nice, I'm planning on making one too, for my college application.

[Averagent]

Nice, I'm planning on making one too, for my college application.

I also made a resume for a job couple weeks ago, the man (who's my boss now) said he didn't even read it. He was so interested due to my creativity that he hired my immediately.

[Fate]

I also made a resume for a job couple weeks ago, the man (who's my boss now) said he didn't even read it. He was so interested due to my creativity that he hired my immediately.

Sound good. Can you show us? Would like to see more of your work.

[Heaven's Husband]

I also made a resume for a job couple weeks ago, the man (who's my boss now) said he didn't even read it. He was so interested due to my creativity that he hired my immediately.

If only it was that easy lol.

[japkop]

Nice work. What program do you use ?

[RiceAndDice]

If only it was that easy lol.

It is that easy lol

[japkop]

Cool work bro. U can make other design.