First song me and my boy recorded.

[aunr]

First song** forgot to put that in title sorry.


https://soundcloud.com/nickolas-ching/the-hills

lmk what you guys think, no negative shit please.

[M4R5H411]

Try to get closer to the mic, add some mixing so you aren't so blurry in the track, breathe away from the mic, don't wanna hear ya inhale Don't repeat the chorus more than twice. Let a mixer edit the lyrics so you canc ut in and out and pause n stuff bc it sounds awkward otherwise Other than that I mean it's not bad. Just get used to the flow of the beat and dont read off a sheet. It really messes it up, kinda sounded like you did. Not being negative just trying to give some pointers
Btw thanks 4 the whale cum

[aunr]

Try to get closer to the mic, add some mixing so you aren't so blurry in the track, breathe away from the mic, don't wanna hear ya inhale Don't repeat the chorus more than twice. Let a mixer edit the lyrics so you canc ut in and out and pause n stuff bc it sounds awkward otherwise Other than that I mean it's not bad. Just get used to the flow of the beat and dont read off a sheet. It really messes it up, kinda sounded like you did. Not being negative just trying to give some pointers
Btw thanks 4 the whale cum

thanks bro, it was our first time. thinking of making more songs. lmk

[EternalGamerz]

weak wrapper always starts with "yeah yeah yeah" or "uh uh uh uh" check it"

[W23rd]

Sounds good, OP. I will transfer this to my Ipod and bump it often

[Chaos]

Nice I guess for your first time meng

[[MPGH]Austin]

fixed yer title

[aunr]

fixed yer title

haaalp . 2/short

[Sammy]

Try put more emotion into it, feels a little... monotone?

[Takatsuki]

how old are you?

[Xiolest]

Make it the last you ever recorded.... jk I like the beat alot, just you voice doesn't sound right with it, really does need more emotion. Hear how these have emotion in it which makes them sound good. https://soundcloud.com/diabla405/grow-up-king-lil-g https://soundcloud.com/upnorthtrips/...rld-is-yours-3

These ones are decent https://soundcloud.com/kevn615/drake-right-hand-ft-kevn https://soundcloud.com/rnb808music/c...z-fresh-prince

[Drama]

Not bad for your first time. some people dont know how to flow with the beat so i guess that's your luck. Nice one!

[LoadoutBroz]

pretty decent stuff keep it up

[Obliteration]

I think you need more enthusiasm or charisma, sounds too monotone and gets boring fast.
But its good that you're open to criticism so keep it up