What do you think? (DBZ sigs)

[Jason]

Hey just a couple of signatures I made about DBZ.

See what you think.

SSJ Broly.



Goten.



Comments?

J-Deezy

[Kuro Tenshi]

SSJ Broly.



Comments?

J-Deezy

why are those lines that pixelated + why not add a inerglow beocause u took away some blacklines like the rightarm doesnt have black lines while the other side do have them... for the rest ito looks okay to me only i neva had chosen that font + the collour because where is it returning or atleast it draws my attention the most thats forsure...

the siggy of goten is nice...

1 thing why didnt u use broly 2 u place 1 of them at the top of all layers and then delete the left arm, then continue the line so that the left arm will be overlapsed with the lines while it continues till its BEHIND the body instead of right next to it.

[Jason]

Thanks for the feedback!

Yeah i think I really screwed up the lines, I'm pretty sure I stroked them with pencil instead of brush so there is no flow :S

I didn't like the Broly one nearly as much as the goten, Broly's glow should have been a different color for sure because this just blends in with his hair and eyebrows too much and I had no idea what to do with the "J-Deezy" bit haha.

Anyways, thanks.

J-Deezy

[Empire]

you kinda cut the render on the second one.