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    What do you think..

    I read an article the other day about an Asian boy growing up in 'the hood' and i was touched. So i wrote this small rap (look, don't flame. it wasn't written to offend).

    What do you think..

    What's that,
    What's this,
    Look left 2 right,
    Got nobody 2 dis.
    Coz we were never right.

    Look here - where i was brought up,
    No asian like me-
    We aint got nothing to say,
    All teasing and all bullying yeah; every day.

    So what you say now?
    You think life is hard?
    No way, my life from day 1?
    It was already marred.
    Bitch, look me in the eyes and see the pain,
    Every second of my life makes this pain remain.
    You talk like your life's the worst,
    Look at mine coz mines accursed.

    -Dazii
    Thank me if i helped aye?






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    pretty tight man keep it up

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    Nice song....

    Could wish i could create melody for all those songs...

    But i dont got time with my guitar to do it

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