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  1. 02-26-2020 #1
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    feedback? first brand design

    first ever design ive finished. working on making a brand soon. thoughts?





    https://imgur.com/uG3zrRa
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  3. 02-26-2020 #2
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    Kinda Lackluster
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    Good for a starter, still needs some work tho.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Janitor View Post
    Good for a starter, still needs some work tho.
    where can i improve? or what does it lack in your eyes? thank you for the feedback
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  6. 02-27-2020 #5
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    Get rid of the thunder, other than that looks good!
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    Nice one for starting.
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    not bad, i like it!
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    Not my style, but not bad for starter design good shit.
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    I'm going to be brutally honest here: in the first mock up, I couldn't read the name nor did I see the mask shape. And is the red text by design?

    It doesn't have a fashion brand feel to it, especially being unreadable.

    Look at exsisting designs and see what makes them appealing. Don't give up
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    That's good for a start bro

    But need to improve : )

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    Nice one for starting.
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    Looks goooood
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    Not quite my style but a good start. Logo sees a bit small on the hoodie.
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