my friend vs me

[leonard208]

He thinks hes better..

By paul
u mthrfker .. chk out my rythm
wile u fil ur mouthful with jism
kickass rap is ma passion,while fati undie is ur fasion , go fool youv cool,go bak to cum sukr,coz ur the gay hooker

By ME
yo yo chec chec chec ths out
Paul
u got no ball
U call that a rap?
u must be joking because its crap
It aint got no rythm
Its only has ur moms jism
U call me a Gay hooker
But we all know whos the actual cooker
so go back to ur su**king
Because u dont know anythng else thn Fu***Ing
Now re think ur rap
Because u only know how to make crap

::WURD::

my first ever rap /yea

[ScapePwn]

Wow, this sucks, :L I'm more like eminem

[DayumKen]

I believe your rap is better. Paul, go suck a dick. Jk. x3

[ShAg12345]

haha paul you suck but not half bad man

[NextGen1]

Wow, this sucks, :L I'm more like eminem

I'll battle Mini M&M


@ Topic, it sounded like7 yr old white boys from a private school trying to rap

[Tiresome]

Good fucking lord.

Never in my life, ever, have I seen worse grammar.

It's just as bad as a kid with down syndrome head-butting the keyboard.

[[]D[][]v[][]D[][]\[]]

ok dude no im srry im not gonna flame or troll but to tell you the truth its not good at all way too short and well no rythm, no flow you talked about jizz too much and since when does sucker rhyme with hooker like wtf im srry but uhm no keep trying write it longer make sure it has flow or idk just dont at all dont let this affect ur confidence on writing shit cuz im not trying to tell you u suck cuz well u do but im not trying to tell you that im trying to tell you that you and paul or whatever need to really read ur own rhymes like do you just write it down and not even check if it rhymes cuz i think thats what you do like im expecting you to try to rhyme balls with testicles next time cuz idk this kinda sucks but well ive been typing too much so yeah try again

[leonard208]

lol.wtf was that
i dont rap anyway
just tried it
I know he sucks

[WOLFPACK X69X]

Good fucking lord.

Never in my life, ever, have I seen worse grammar.

It's just as bad as a kid with down syndrome head-butting the keyboard.

[billionman]

DUDE of course yours is better , your friend paul sounds like a retard on a good day.

[Son]

He thinks hes better..

By paul
u mthrfker .. chk out my rythm
wile u fil ur mouthful with jism
kickass rap is ma passion,while fati undie is ur fasion , go fool youv cool,go bak to cum sukr,coz ur the gay hooker

By ME
yo yo chec chec chec ths out
Paul
u got no ball
U call that a rap?
u must be joking because its crap
It aint got no rythm
Its only has ur moms jism
U call me a Gay hooker
But we all know whos the actual cooker
so go back to ur su**king
Because u dont know anythng else thn Fu***Ing
Now re think ur rap
Because u only know how to make crap

::WURD::

my first ever rap /yea

You both fucking suck. Go off yourselves.

[[MPGH]Killian]

they both fucking suck.
gtfo this section.
you bring us shame.

[Son]

And Leonard you look like Jeffrey Star. Go kill yourself fag.