Neither of them are bad at all.
Just work on basic things like composition, mainly pertaining to the first one. There's a lot of noise, but has potential.
Constructive Criticism Plox?
Neither of them are bad at all.
Just work on basic things like composition, mainly pertaining to the first one. There's a lot of noise, but has potential.
Hitmaniac (09-14-2010)
Thanks Ryan for the CnC /yea
first one got lots more scratches than the canvas can take .. the sword is over sharpened
second one .. well i dunno u made the katana/sword a source of light , thought i would see more of light effect on the render , try to change the font and text color .
but still thats way better than what i do when i play around xD
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Looks cool.
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I like the second one the first one is to colorful in the middle
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