Ill put you down like a sick puppy.

[AesopRock1227]

both you punks are lacking skill
Looking for some1 to end it? well i will
1 is corny while the other just sucks
you couldnt get someone to like that for a million bucks
my rhymin is immaculate
your face, im smackin it
and gamer i wasnt talking shyt about your name
i was talkin shyt about the fact that your lame
But on the other hand, D-D-D-R-R-R
so- you stutter? have i pegged it thus far?
Talkin about you suckas beating me?
You migdets gotta jump up just to kick me in the knee
You claiming you a murdera
but i aint ever heard of ya
Well its easy to see
You punks cant beat me
And by the end of the day
Youll see my flow is basic only minus B A

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

both you punks are lacking skill
Looking for some1 to end it? well i will
1 is corny while the other just sucks
you couldnt get someone to like that for a million bucks
my rhymin is immaculate
your face, im smackin it
and gamer i wasnt talking shyt about your name
i was talkin shyt about the fact that your lame
But on the other hand, D-D-D-R-R-R
so- you stutter? have i pegged it thus far?
Talkin about you suckas beating me?
You migdets gotta jump up just to kick me in the knee
You claiming you a murdera
but i aint ever heard of ya
Well its easy to see
You punks cant beat me
And by the end of the day
Youll see my flow is basic only minus B A

Nice.

[AesopRock1227]

Thanks now just waiting on an answer lol

[~Gamer~]

both you punks are lacking skill
Looking for some1 to end it? well i will
1 is corny while the other just sucks
you couldnt get someone to like that for a million bucks
my rhymin is immaculate
your face, im smackin it
and gamer i wasnt talking shyt about your name
i was talkin shyt about the fact that your lame
But on the other hand, D-D-D-R-R-R
so- you stutter? have i pegged it thus far?
Talkin about you suckas beating me?
You migdets gotta jump up just to kick me in the knee
You claiming you a murdera
but i aint ever heard of ya
Well its easy to see
You punks cant beat me
And by the end of the day
Youll see my flow is basic only minus B A

I see you made a comeback
too bad it was simply a week planned attack
u think your so tough
but you ain't no stuff
i'll crack your bones 1 by 1
crack them up till nones left
your flow ain't basic
it ain't even statistic
you should understand than your a prick
and u wish you had a dick
ur raps aint tight
they aint right
theyre so bad than I wanna pick a fight
punch you once
punch you twice
beat you up till you stop breathing
you wont stop bleeding
you make me sick
are you a bitch-on-a-stick?
u must be poor
sucking cocks for money you hoar
and everytime you close that door
you make sure it doesnt hit you in the ass
you think your all bad ass
but I looked at your rap and said
"I could shit a better argument than that"
I think Im done
gave it my best shot
so while your at it
show me what you got
Bitch.

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

I see you made a comeback
too bad it was simply a week planned attack
u think your so tough
but you ain't no stuff
i'll crack your bones 1 by 1
crack them up till nones left
your flow ain't basic
it ain't even statistic
you should understand than your a prick
and u wish you had a dick
ur raps aint tight
they aint right
theyre so bad than I wanna pick a fight
punch you once
punch you twice
beat you up till you stop breathing
you wont stop bleeding
you make me sick
are you a bitch-on-a-stick?
u must be poor
sucking cocks for money you hoar
and everytime you close that door
you make sure it doesnt hit you in the ass
you think your all bad ass
but I looked at your rap and said
"I could shit a better argument than that"
I think Im done
gave it my best shot
so while your at it
show me what you got
Bitch.

you're garbage

[~Gamer~]

you're garbage

It's my first time, I know I suck anyways

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

It's my first time, I know I suck anyways

My bad, didn't know you were new at this thing.
Just try to work on your sentence structure,
Flow, and overall wordplay.

A good thing to do is look over some pro lyrics
Get an idea of how they form their work

[AesopRock1227]

I see you made a comeback
too bad it was simply a week planned attack
u think your so tough
but you ain't no stuff
i'll crack your bones 1 by 1
crack them up till nones left
your flow ain't basic
it ain't even statistic
you should understand than your a prick
and u wish you had a dick
ur raps aint tight
they aint right
theyre so bad than I wanna pick a fight
punch you once
punch you twice
beat you up till you stop breathing
you wont stop bleeding
you make me sick
are you a bitch-on-a-stick?
u must be poor
sucking cocks for money you hoar
and everytime you close that door
you make sure it doesnt hit you in the ass
you think your all bad ass
but I looked at your rap and said
"I could shit a better argument than that"
I think Im done
gave it my best shot
so while your at it
show me what you got
Bitch.

Damn kid i dropped a a ten ton bomb
and you bcome back with THAT?
eth said it best yo you're garbage
so come back when you can battlerap
How you gonna even try to rhyme
when you didnt even get my last punchline
take BA off basic and youll see that im sic
so just try to write a rap without mentioning a dick
o yea, and when i spit this fire don't be hit by a stray
cause every syllable i say will fuckup your vertebrae
I could keep talking shyt until your face got teary and contorted
But your mom said it best "Gamer, i should have had you aborted!"



Damn bro i kinda feel bad about this last one nothing personal just having fun lol

EDIT:anyone can jump in just go for it its not me vs gamer

[cole32547]

With billa ima hit the bong
till im so far gone
i don't even notice how your flow is all wrong
cause your styles all gone
used up and drained
your bitch came to me saying she's done with the game
cause your little white dick just cant handle the strain!
but im feelin her pain
My lines are in vain!
You are already hung out like saddam hussein
your rhyming is simple
forever municipal
stay below deck
like your blowin the principal
On 16 wheels my flow rests on invincible
Do i see that your sic?
Rather, i see you turnin it around and planting one where i sit
you put in 2 cents?
well i took out a dime
Oh yeah, and when i said principle i really meant mine

[AesopRock1227]

With billa ima hit the bong
till im so far gone
i don't even notice how your flow is all wrong
cause your styles all gone
used up and drained
your bitch came to me saying she's done with the game
cause your little white dick just cant handle the strain!
but im feelin her pain
My lines are in vain!
You are already hung out like saddam hussein
your rhyming is simple
forever municipal
stay below deck
like your blowin the principal
On 16 wheels my flow rests on invincible
Do i see that your sic?
Rather, i see you turnin it around and planting one where i sit
you put in 2 cents?
well i took out a dime
Oh yeah, and when i said principle i really meant mine

Wow just wow. Very nice ill reply in the morning lol ZzzZZZz

[cole32547]

haha thanks and alright bro g'night.

[~Gamer~]

Ive been training and this ones beter:

lissen up. lissen up
man, you mustve bin pissin up
I'm the baddest rapper in this game
My lines make others go insane
They so fine
they must be mine

all you punkass wannabe rappers
wit all your fake bling bling
wacked little lines
neva seen the streets or anything

Shorties, youd ben beaten by cops
crushed like a petal
Give me the props
or feel my metal

Yus thinks you know it all, yu lazy n fat
Keep messin' wit me 'n feel my spiked bat

(is that any better and no offence also lol)

[Scrcrw VIII]

put me down like a sick dog??
ill make u choke on my cock
cause its the size of a log
and harder than rock
my cum will get u stuck in a bog
chain u down like a pad lock

[~Gamer~]

put me down like a sick dog??
ill make u choke on my cock
cause its the size of a log
and harder than rock
my cum will get u stuck in a bog
chain u down like a pad lock

youz pretty fly, boi,
youz think ya fine
butTheyz callz ya ScrScr
coz ya aint got no spine

One looks at me and ya turn to spagetti
Your water gun aint no match for my machete
goes back 2 ya private primary class
u two bit ho, 'fore I pound your white ass.

Is tat all u got, I expected some gore
now rap some good shit bfore I pound you some more

[Scrcrw VIII]

youz pretty fly, boi,
youz think ya fine
butTheyz callz ya ScrScr
coz ya aint got no spine

One looks at me and ya turn to spagetti
Your water gun aint no match for my machete
goes back 2 ya private primary class
u two bit ho, 'fore I pound your white ass.

Is tat all u got, I expected some gore
now rap some good shit bfore I pound you some more

i wonder why it turs to spaghetti
cause compared to you
there are better looking yettis
better not cry boo hoo
cause imma show u why they call me screw

daum bitch cant handle this
ganna take u for a ride
just like i took ur sis
so nigga better hide
before i hit u like a king tide

exit stage right
head out into the cold night
cause screwbro gave u a fright
and now i'll say good night