Over sharpened focal is over sharpened. Tone the birghtness down a bit too while you're at it. The text is kind of bad too.
5/10.
Over sharpened focal is over sharpened. Tone the birghtness down a bit too while you're at it. The text is kind of bad too.
5/10.
aeronyx (11-07-2010)
Take out the artistic filters and stuff and tone down the brightness and sharpness. Also, maybe add a light source to it.
aeronyx (11-07-2010)
I don't like the filters you used, and you didn't blend the render at all. You just threw it on top.
Text doesn't really match anything on the sig color wise, and it doesn't blend at all.
Whats up with the overdone brightness? 8/10
Only /me can use C4D's at MPGH nigga.
thats a really interesting style , never seen it before u may want to work on some flaws , like over-saturation , that random C4D behind freeman's head , the random effects at the top left
if u organized all that in one flow bulk would really be better.
remove text its not blending and totally distracting the focal
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